New TR SS: Pain of Remorse:Ch2:pg11 updated - Page 12

Originally posted by: diyadawda13

It's actually a bit confusing but I like it like that.

Great job on the last 2 chapters.

Please continue soon.

yeap, I know why you are finding it lil confusing as you want to know the reason behind their separation nah?? well that will be updated within a very few moments, the last chapter, perhaps😊
Thanks for this comment😊

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

i don't think i commented on the banner...one word for it

its A.W.E.S.O.M.E 👍🏼

You are meritorious and intelligent as well⭐️

Originally posted by: -upama-

I read both the parts together!

Debu Di,This SS of your's really touched my heart. I have read just two parts but i have fallen madly in love with this SS. First it was THLH and now this one.. Seriously,Hats off to you for writing such an amazing story. First of all,They are 45 years😲 This was unexpected. But still staying apart from eachother for so many years also the love between them is same (Dil chu liya mera😭) Aab toh pakka beleive ho gaya ki app ne Pyaar,Ishq aur Mohobaat mein Phd kiya hai😆

Good going di, Want to read more and want to know the reason why they are seperated... I know yeh story bhi mujhe bohot rulane wala hai.

Next part jaldi update kardo and love you❤️

ha nahi toh, payar ishq aur mohabaat mein phd hai toh isiliye hi toh I am writing theses love stories😛😉😆
yeap Behan, the reason of their separation is nothing a great mystery, the normal conjugal fights and dis balance..I will update it now😊
I love you two, three, four and infinity🤗

Originally posted by: soumiluvztaarey

Superb update di
It wass really cute
N their flashbacks was really sweet
N then taani dialouge me "beside now my life has many bitter memories so I have to add extra sugar in it"
It was fantastic heart touching part di
Update soon n PM me

Hey Soumya, just love you that you have really understood the inner meaning what I wanted to express😊

Thanks for your comment gal🤗

Originally posted by: sashaz_sis

Chapter 2:

Still the same questions are running in my mind...

A five year old relationship then marriage n then separation...😭

What changed their lives...???

Shweta, thanks for commenting dear🤗
First toh..why are they separated..kuch humne kahne ki koashish ki par wo na sunhe, aur wo kahe dala jo hum nahi sunna chahte the..
something normal..diff of opinion

Originally posted by: hima_crazyD3fan

It was jzt awesome..!!!

luved the update.. it was so good yr..!!!
jzt now red both the chapters yr they r jzt mindblowing..!!

the emotions feelings everything is so awesomely written yr jzt luved it..!!!

ab jaldi se update krna okk..!!!

Thanks behena for this cute sa comment ke liye🤗

Originally posted by: Mohit_monaya

omg di...i lovee you sooo soo muchh for this... 🤗

you have no cluee as to how much this is coming out so perfectly!

i really really lovee it alott ❤️

i know, im being so mean with taarey being separated and stuff...but really, i mean sab love stories doesnt have a fairytale ending...and the pain of separation, though u r in love with the person was brought out so perfectly... hats off to you di 👏

and now coming to this update...it was mindblowing..

in literal sense...

the way you described their feelings, rather Rey's POV was jus amazing!

esp with the flashbacks and the present..

the contrast was soo clear...

the awkwardness between the duo was jus perfectly shown...moreover practical 😊

i loved the way you showed taani saying... "it was our favorite flower"

and the flashback when taani proposed rey...i really loved that part too..

it had so much emotions attached to it... it was really heartfelt...

my favourite line will be this one:

Fragrance from my life has become old, Taani, what seed we planted together, it had died long before..

it was jus so perfect for the situation...really wondering how you came up with this one..

but how can i forget..you are a pro at this...

but i really really loved this line...it described everything...

then the job scenario...i really love the way you coupled the flashback with the present...

showing the change and contrast at the same time...

and yeah! male ego! again really practical...

trust me di, after each update im fallin in love with this SS more and moree...

and then the order part...gosh! it was mindblowing...

the way she changed the order and esp the dialogue which followed...

"My taste has been changed, people changes, everything changes..we have also changed a lot, Rey" she says these lines with a painful voice,"besides, now my life has filled with some bitter memories, so I need extra sugar to add", she concluded.

its jus so perfect you know...the change...

and along with that,...rey's thought that "taani ...you are mine"

*sigh*

it was so emotional...but well, i loved it...

it was really heartfelt...

thank god aapne yaha pe end kar diya, or else wuld have started crying...sachhi...

but really di...its soo amazingg!

i mean you know, this story more deals with the emotions, and it was perfectly shown here...

im really in love with this SS...

i cant thank you enough for writing such an amazingg SS...

i owe you a huge time for this...

loveee youu soo muchhh... 🤗

looking forward to the next part... 😳

@bold - right, I actually also believe this, in our practical life too we can find these so much. We can have an urge to get him, but everything depends on destiny, the almighty written it for us..

Thanks so much sweetu for this over whelming appreciation🤗
It means a lot to me and I am glad that you have liked it so much..😃

Originally posted by: asha_TAAREY

Brilliant! Rey reminiscing hs clg days wit Tani ws much blisful! Ty wr married 2! D eqn bw thm hv chngd to such an awkwardness! Its smtg vry d/f,Lvng tis stry!

Thanks Asha for this brilliant comment😊
I just love it🤗

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

i find my eyes slightly moist...Superb update dear!

this time i won't go in a sequence...coz a thing in this update has caught me badly so i'll start my comment with that only

i was like this 😲 when i read that TR did marry each other before separating, and this made me feel even more sad for them 😭

Why Why Why?

Jab ye dono aik dusre ke liye bane hain to phir kyun inke raaste itne juda juda hain 😭

i don't think either of them has moved on...even if they have they are not happy with their life, just like i earlier said "Zindagi jee nahin rahe Zindagi kaat rahe hain"

pardon me if i could understand it properly...but heart is on the left side na, isn't it? 😕

"My right side of the body, my sleeping heart starts saying again, DHAK... DHAK... DHAK"

are they meeting because they promised each other to meet at Rey's 45th birthday before parting their ways ten years back?

yes koi rule nahin hai ki flowers are only for females 😆 hmm blue orchids...even i like them

loved TR conversation in the flashback...i think both are fulfilling their promise

so their career choices are the reason of their separation 😕

Taani was obviously not happy with Rey's decision of not joining that international troupe...i think she wanted financial security but Rey din't want to compromise his talent and passion for money

and Taani this sugar cannot add any sweetness to ur life...it can only increase ur chances of getting diabetes 😆

looking forward to the next update...hopefully the reason of their sepration will be revealed...Oh God Debu kitne secrets rakhe hue hain tum ne...THLH mei Rey ka secret, yahan TR seperation ka secret 😆

update soon nd thanx for the pm 😊

@1st bold - OMG😲..is it so?? some one said that it is easy to make you cry, but it is tough to make you laugh..you think so too kya?

@2nd bold - har baar zaroori nahi hota, jo ek dusra ke liye bane huye hote ek dusre ko mill jaye..God writes our destiny, we are just puppet of his hand

@3rd bold - I just love it..superb line..how could you find this girl!!! so true..jab tum sath hote ho toh har subah khubsurat aur har sham suhani hoti hai..aur tumse bichar ke kya pata raat kaha aur din kab hota hai (this is my thought and my line, sorry for any grammatical mistake as i am not good at Hindi and Urdu😳😃)

@4th bold - I also think it, but there are few group of ppl who think flowers are only for gal..😛

@5th bold - not exactly , One of the reason..not career choice but their diff of opinion, diff of ambition etc

@6th bold - actually can't blame Taani too..after all ek ladki sab kuch chod ke chali aate hai uske saath aapni puri zindgi bitane ke liye jisko wo chahti hai..trust karti hai..

@7th bold - hahahahaha well said, but I don't know if you have understood the irony of the line or not, pls do let me clear this. I wanted to mean that Taani is less cautious about her health now, she has lost so many things that turned her life into a cactus, no artificial thing can influence her now😊

nahi nahi, itne bhi suspense nahi😳😊..just diff of opinion..kuch hum kahe jo wo suna nahi aur kuch wo kahi jo hum unsuna kar gayee

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Debu, its beautifully written. So emotional...
Im dying to know why Taarey separated. U did a fantastic job. Plz continue soon

The normal conjugal jhagra nats..diff of opinion ..kuch minor, kuch major etc..
thanks for this comment Nats😊