New TR SS: Pain of Remorse:Ch2:pg11 updated

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raveena

@raveena1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

awsmmm ..amazing..read bth chaps in one go...bth are just mind-blowing...plz update nxt soon and PM me.

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

i find my eyes slightly moist...Superb update dear!

this time i won't go in a sequence...coz a thing in this update has caught me badly so i'll start my comment with that only

i was like this 😲 when i read that TR did marry each other before separating, and this made me feel even more sad for them 😭

Why Why Why?

Jab ye dono aik dusre ke liye bane hain to phir kyun inke raaste itne juda juda hain 😭

i don't think either of them has moved on...even if they have they are not happy with their life, just like i earlier said "Zindagi jee nahin rahe Zindagi kaat rahe hain"

pardon me if i could understand it properly...but heart is on the left side na, isn't it? 😕

"My right side of the body, my sleeping heart starts saying again, DHAK... DHAK... DHAK"

are they meeting because they promised each other to meet at Rey's 45th birthday before parting their ways ten years back?

yes koi rule nahin hai ki flowers are only for females 😆 hmm blue orchids...even i like them

loved TR conversation in the flashback...i think both are fulfilling their promise

so their career choices are the reason of their separation 😕

Taani was obviously not happy with Rey's decision of not joining that international troupe...i think she wanted financial security but Rey din't want to compromise his talent and passion for money

and Taani this sugar cannot add any sweetness to ur life...it can only increase ur chances of getting diabetes 😆

looking forward to the next update...hopefully the reason of their sepration will be revealed...Oh God Debu kitne secrets rakhe hue hain tum ne...THLH mei Rey ka secret, yahan TR seperation ka secret 😆

update soon nd thanx for the pm 😊

Edited by Favouriteofall - 12 years ago

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dildostidance09

@dildostidance09

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Awww.. that was such a cute update..!!

After 10 yrs they still knw so much abt each other..!!

And i lyk when rey ask taani u used to prefer black coffe with no sugar and she replied people changes and besides her lyf is filled with so many bitter memories so she need sugar..!!

Can't wait to read further..!!

and thanx for the pm..!!

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Sharina

@shamanbk

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Sweet update!!!!!!

please update soon and pm me.

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Debu, its beautifully written. So emotional...
Im dying to know why Taarey separated. U did a fantastic job. Plz continue soon

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Nikita

@--coco--

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

It was beautiful, loved Rey's flashback...
Gosh they were so close, they even got married !!!!!!
Then what happened why were they separated ?????? 🤔
Well I will get to know that later 😆
But I must tell you your storytelling is superb...

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sangeetha

@sangee_manan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Debu is it u who wrote dis story? Sachi..omg do i ve a frnd who write so flawlesly, lovely,emotionaly...debu i lovd it yaar.mast fadu tha...ayo including past in present memories , rey's inner feeling gravity, u ve caught it yaar...nd y always my taani get hurt?kyun kyun kyun...;(...hmm its k.but debu, u r super versatile writer.take my bow..k...haha jyada kush math ho jao..jaldi se update karo k..aur jab fre hojata toh bath karo yaar.kab tak intezar karna hoga..lovd dis update..hehe.bye dr

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asha rani.B.S

@Asha_Tacker

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Brilliant! Rey reminiscing hs clg days wit Tani ws much blisful! Ty wr married 2! D eqn bw thm hv chngd to such an awkwardness! Its smtg vry d/f,Lvng tis stry!

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Sneha

@Mohit_monaya

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

omg di...i lovee you sooo soo muchh for this... 🤗

you have no cluee as to how much this is coming out so perfectly!

i really really lovee it alott ❤️

i know, im being so mean with taarey being separated and stuff...but really, i mean sab love stories doesnt have a fairytale ending...and the pain of separation, though u r in love with the person was brought out so perfectly... hats off to you di 👏

and now coming to this update...it was mindblowing..

in literal sense...

the way you described their feelings, rather Rey's POV was jus amazing!

esp with the flashbacks and the present..

the contrast was soo clear...

the awkwardness between the duo was jus perfectly shown...moreover practical 😊

i loved the way you showed taani saying... "it was our favorite flower"

and the flashback when taani proposed rey...i really loved that part too..

it had so much emotions attached to it... it was really heartfelt...

my favourite line will be this one:

Fragrance from my life has become old, Taani, what seed we planted together, it had died long before..

it was jus so perfect for the situation...really wondering how you came up with this one..

but how can i forget..you are a pro at this...

but i really really loved this line...it described everything...

then the job scenario...i really love the way you coupled the flashback with the present...

showing the change and contrast at the same time...

and yeah! male ego! again really practical...

trust me di, after each update im fallin in love with this SS more and moree...

and then the order part...gosh! it was mindblowing...

the way she changed the order and esp the dialogue which followed...

"My taste has been changed, people changes, everything changes..we have also changed a lot, Rey" she says these lines with a painful voice,"besides, now my life has filled with some bitter memories, so I need extra sugar to add", she concluded.

its jus so perfect you know...the change...

and along with that,...rey's thought that "taani ...you are mine"

*sigh*

it was so emotional...but well, i loved it...

it was really heartfelt...

thank god aapne yaha pe end kar diya, or else wuld have started crying...sachhi...

but really di...its soo amazingg!

i mean you know, this story more deals with the emotions, and it was perfectly shown here...

im really in love with this SS...

i cant thank you enough for writing such an amazingg SS...

i owe you a huge time for this...

loveee youu soo muchhh... 🤗