|| Lets Live Twice ||- KriYaansh FF - Page 5

Originally posted by: Roxxy47

Wah!! U started a new work... hehehe.. yess!!

Tere pass dimag kahan se ata hai re itna 😛 .. God knows!
I toh thought u were busy with studies 😳 .. i WAS busy.

Anyways ab start kar he liya hai toh kya kar sakte hain ... sahi bola..
Coming to the story... Finally..
In start when read it I thought she must be a spoilt brat... hm.. i guess.
But woh brat kese ho sakti hai woh toh ek teacher hai ... 😆 ... Hahaha..
Yeh tu ne kya kiya Kria ko teacher bana diya 😲 ... arrey han baba, tu bad me samjhegi..
Kria ke dad thora ajeeb lage ... hmm.. dekhti jaa..
Kria ko Rey flirt laga , this is going to be interesting 😉 ... hehehe..

Text u used were simple yet awesome ... aww...thanksh!
The way u wrote the part using red , orange n yellow , that was beautiful...
Loving it ❤️ ... thankyou! 🤗

U enjoy ur vacation... Yeah,
N take care 🤗 u too!

Originally posted by: zona_malik

DAT WAS FREAKING AWESOME concept... awwweee... realllyyy?? thanksh!!

LOVED IT Awwiieee

AMAZING ab itni bhi tareef mat karo.. 😳

SPLENDID 😳

Update soon :) will try..

Originally posted by: aishu3003

awesomeee start👏 aww.. .thanksh!! :*

do continue soon😈😆 Ill try..

wil b waiting for d update😃 awww...

Originally posted by: ..Roop..

that was a really good start...awww sacchi??

the way you started the story is interesting... thankyou!! ^_^

phle i thought k the guy who is staring her...

is rey...than i thought k nhi koi or hai n than u confirmed k yaa its rey...hahaha... itna socha aapne? haww...

but why was he staring her... u'll get to know soon enough...

they know each other??? maybe maybe not.

loved the way u/ve written...aww..thanksh!

but i have one prob plz next time thoda dark colour use kar font k liye... hahahaha.. okkk..

other than that...it was superb... thanks!

m really looking forward to it...:) :) :) :) : ) :)

n enjoy ur vacation... yeah. ty.

n come back soon... ofcourse..

DiDI DIDI naa... rahii... :P :P

Originally posted by: -shenz-

*Rolling eyes*

Originally posted by: Rashi_d3

What? What did i do?

Originally posted by: -shenz-

Oh you. No rey, you are such an innocent baby. Tujhe kuch kyu samjhega. Huh!!!

Originally posted by: -shenz-

Aww... You are such a kid. Aren't you?

Anyways FORGET it.

Originally posted by: nature2

update next chp