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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Superb concept. .
Awsome chappy 1 . .
Waiting 4 d nxt update. .

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Amazing concept ...

Very interesting indeed ...

Waiting to read more ...

Continue soon ...

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

interesting...thanks 4 the pm...😊

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raina

@--RAINA--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

amazing start..
Do continue soon
thankx 4 d pm

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

my my!!!

amazing story

love the title

the chapter one was amaizng

dhasu start tha...

please do continue soon

and pm me for sure

thank you for the pm

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

new ss?? 😲

pehle wnm ka update de aalsi 😆

seems like .. kriya is superrich 😛

& rey ho gya pehli hi nazar me uspe lattu

aur kriya bhi affect hoying 😉

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: -Ocean.eyes-
3rd pg pe res
lol

Oyee.. Dant na dikhao kinjal di.. me na res karna bhul gayi thi isiliye 3rd page pe kiya.

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Wah!! U started a new work...
Tere pass dimag kahan se ata hai re itna 😛 ..
I toh thought u were busy with studies 😳 ..

Anyways ab start kar he liya hai toh kya kar sakte hain ...
Coming to the story...
In start when read it I thought she must be a spoilt brat...
But woh brat kese ho sakti hai woh toh ek teacher hai ... 😆 ...
Yeh tu ne kya kiya Kria ko teacher bana diya 😲 ...
Kria ke dad thora ajeeb lage ...
Kria ko Rey flirt laga , this is going to be interesting 😉 ...

Text u used were simple yet awesome ...
The way u wrote the part using red , orange n yellow , that was beautiful...
Loving it ❤️ ...

U enjoy ur vacation...
N take care 🤗