|| Lets Live Twice ||- KriYaansh FF - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Interesting Concept..
Luvd d 1st chappy.. It was really nice..
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
awesomeee start👏
do continue soon😈😆
wil b waiting for d update😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Unreserved on page one.
Do check out as and when you get time.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
that was a really good start...

the way you started the story is interesting...

phle i thought k the guy who is staring her...

is rey...than i thought k nhi koi or hai n than u confirmed k yaa its rey...

but why was he staring her...

they know each other???

loved the way u/ve written...

but i have one prob plz next time thoda dark colour use kar font k liye...

other than that...it was superb...

m really looking forward to it...

n enjoy ur vacation...

n come back soon...



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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
wow! this is different!
Loved it,
how rey stared at her & how he randomly came upto her
Deffo continue this and do pm! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
nyc story...
update was short n sweet...
loved kriya's charecterisation...
kriyaansh meet was gud...
waiting for update...
thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Simplyyy awsummm yaaarrr... loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Interesting concept :-) would love to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
nycc start bt m confused plz update d nxt prt soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -shenz-

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Well Sweetipie, that dedication to me wasnt really required. no it was!You know I am always there to help you out in any manner I can. i know.. And this time it was just a mere help. Just a peanut sized help. Anyways you have praised me more than what I deserve. U say dat all the time, find a better dilogue please, this one's so old now!!

so this how it goes. I knew from where would you start. I am antaryami 🤣 you see 😉 haha.. you knew because u only told me what to do, where to start, how to start etc (And, according to you thats a mere help! big joke!)

Well well well. I though it would be a more descriptive. But tune mere saare armano pe paani fer diya. *pout* Hehehehe.. how can u even expect yaar? i wrote it in 30 mins.. Kinjal di ki jai ho! 1 ghante me 4 text lake diye!!
Chalo koi baat nahi. I understand time kam tha. So excused but mind it next time. Honoured!!

I know why her father behaved so weird at his own birthday. you do? Waise unka birthday hai. I doubt. *suspicious eyes* Lolz! guess karte raho!!

Mujhe woh cafe ka scene zyada kuch samajh nahi aaya. Except for Rey ke saath meeting. Well it isnt there first meeting. Right 😳 dont give other people clues di.. vese i guess.

Rey cant help but stare her intensely all the time. After all Kria ka effect hai. 😆 hihihihiiihi.. good one!


Hope you continue soon
. i guess no, u know the reason.
Have a safe and happy journey.
Enjiy your vacation.
Shukriya Shukriya!!
Love you. Love ya too!! 🤗

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