|| Lets Live Twice ||- KriYaansh FF

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Text Credit to Kinjal di 🤗




What if your love forgets you the very next day?




What if he makes her fall in love with him Each and Every day, That too all over Again!!??






Dedicated To...



This FF is for everyone who thinks I'm good-for-nothing (which actually i am! 😛)

Well, Also for my all time banner maker and a great sister Kinjal Di.. Thanks for jheling me and my drama Sistah!! we're just a couple of Nautanki aren't we?

My one and only the most caring, loving sister one can ever have Shenz Di, Thanks for your help with this FF.. It wasn't possible without you..

Thirdly, my friend Ayushi a.k.a Ayu, who helped me with this idea, thanks for jheling my bak bak 24/7.

I dont know how to thank three of you, so thought of bringing this up in my little piece of work. Love you guys ALOT!
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Chapter 1



14th April 2012
She woke up, the same glint in her eyes and the same melody in her voice, she yelled "Coffee!!" her beauty defined everything, she was no doubt the most beautiful girl in Dubai, it was her beauty that got millions of boys head over heels for her. Well, she woke up, seeing her pretty face on the mirror she realized how badly she needed a trip to parlour, well, she got up from her bed and saw that she was late, whatever! it's a sunday anyway. she thought and placed her expensive feet on the comfortable slipper, after her regular routine of bathing, freshening up, she got down to wish her father Happy Birthday! somehow when she noticed his face he didn't look that happy as he should be, she hugged her father and went out to have her breakfast 'coz that's what she does on sundays.

Another week upcoming, the next day thrilled her, being a teacher by profession, she usually didn't have much work, she sat down on the table comfortably having her new book tightly in her hand, she noticed someone staring at her, she knew somehow that was common as Indian girls are taught to be patient and ignore such creepy boys from the moment they're born, frankly, she liked the guy sitting on the right table. she stole a quick glance at him while he was ordering, He looked okay, actually quite mature and simple, but not her kind of man, she opened her book and there came the owner of the store and a great friend of her mom, 'Sue' well, that's what was the nickname of the elderly lady as her whole name was 'Sunita'. 'Nice haircut Sue' she yelled and the elderly lady thanked her. She placed her order and then opened her book to read it,

'Midnight Page 67'

She continued reading the bestselling novel, when she found that he was still staring her, she was starting to feel, um, a bit enclosed, why was he looking at her in such manner? she somehow ignored the stare, but, you know, it's impossible to ignore a person when you know that they're staring you, and due to his deadly gaze she could possibly not concentrate on her novel, so, she started to look out of the window by the time her order was being served, until she found a hand towards her.
'Hi' the guy said forwarding his hand, why, did he get bored of staring? so, now he was infront of her, she could smell his powerfull deoderant, what did he do? emptied the whole bottle on himself? 'Rey' he next said and she wondered what kind of name that was.

'Hey! Kriya' she said accepting the handshake, while he looked at her in a weird way, which made her heart give a funny little kick, and then like a un-welcomed guest he sat on her table, huh! what was he trying to do? impress her? well, he should know that she was not that kind of girl who gets impressed just by the charm of any regular flirt. She was waiting for him to speak up something, and ofcourse, if he tries to flirt again, she would surely punch that fancy face of his.



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Okay, so i know, it wasn't that good..
But, thats all i could do in 30 minutes, as im hell lot busy!
most of you might be knowing, that I'm leaving for Delhi tomorrow, so, I definitely will be INACTIVE..
and, this is kinda rare concept, so i'll discontinue if you people don't like it or i don't get a nice response..
Tell me how it was,
Leave your precious comments!
Love you!
Muaaahhh..

Edited by Rashi_d3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Index


Chapter 1: Page 1, Scroll up.
Edited by Rashi_d3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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me 😛
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unreserved

Well Sweetipie, that dedication to me wasnt really required. You know I am always there to help you out in any manner I can. And this time it was just a mere help. Just a peanut sized help. Anyways you have praised me more than what I deserve.

so this how it goes. I knew from where would you start. I am antaryami 🤣 you see 😉

Well well well. I though it would be a more descriptive. But tune mere saare armano pe paani fer diya. *pout*
Chalo koi baat nahi. I understand time kam tha. So excused but mind it next time.

I know why her father behaved so weird at his own birthday. Waise unka birthday hai. I doubt. *suspicious eyes*

Mujhe woh cafe ka scene zyada kuch samajh nahi aaya. Except for Rey ke saath meeting. Well it isnt there first meeting. Right 😳

Rey cant help but stare her intensely all the time. After all Kria ka effect hai. 😆

Hope you continue soon.
Have a safe and happy journey.
Enjiy your vacation.

Love you.
Edited by -shenz- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oye bina chapter 1 post kiye kahan bhaag gayi.. 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mee mee
evn i cn res
yaay
unres
.
Monku...its such an interesting concept

me loved the first part

beautifuly written yaar...

Though it was short but really amazing...
So rey kria pehle hi part me mil gaye...niiiccceee
me like

cont soon thanx 4 the pm and scrap

am glad u liked the banner text...though itna acha nai hai
still

and ha
happy and safe journey

wil mis u monku
luv ya
Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res
Unres

Okay have to say an amazing start!! 🤗
Loved it 👏
Kriya is Dubai?
Wow I want to go there!!!!!!!
Anyways kya baat hai rashi loved the concept 😉
Continue soon

Anu
:)
Edited by Luvkriyansh-anu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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story quite different... do pm me when u update... wait...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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GreaT start 😆😆
Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chappy 1 bas itna sa??
plz pm me wen u update

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