Through The Looking Glass| ArHi | Ch11Pg1 (14/08) - Page 17

Originally posted by: -Emma.K-

What a first chapter!

The way in which you wrote the conversation, leaves me just wondering and anticipating more! It's as if you revealed so much throughout their convo, yet told us so little!

I loved what happened between these two. Almost as if they were just trying to be nonchalant about it, but secretly hiding something underneath all their layers. Arnav's question made me smile, was she worried about his bloodshed or theirs? I'm sure she was worried about him.

From the description you have given, I am pretty sure this is Khushi! And I adore her, she knows how to answer for herself. Rae please just tell us if this is Arnav, it's killing me! 😆 Gangster is smitten and wants to see her again, I wonder how that will go! *daydreaming about it*

Amazing update as usual Rae! I seriously can't wait for the next one 😃

Originally posted by: preethi28

The conversation was very very interesting.

You don't expect a gangster to behave so normally and offer to make chai in the house of an unknown girl who just saved him from the police. He was so casual ,asking her why she saved him with curiosity and curiosity alone. It caught me by surprise. Not suspicious only curious.

She was intriguing. Treating a gangster like he was a normal person. Justifying her actions saying she didn't want bloodshed. It may have been one of her reasons but clearly she knows him, the annoyance gave her away.

Being annoyed of a gangster who holds a gun. Either she is very brave or she knows that he won't hurt her.

I can't wait for the next chapter. The last lines of the chapter have made me impatient 😊

Originally posted by: Raila1014

Why did she save him? I don't buy her reasons. Their conversation felt so normal and casual, like a regular couple having tea and sharing their day with each other. But they are neither a couple nor normal. He is very observant and caught that annoyance in her eyes. They will meet again but I am dreading it based on your last line. What is she involved in in night time activities? Is she a call girl?

Originally posted by: khusiarnav

You dear, i am glad you dont remember the whole movie otherwise it would not be that fun reading this story!!! The way u write with ur own imagination and twist n turns makes it fun!!
Loved the loved!! Looking forward to next one!! :)

Originally posted by: sruthiif.1710

I would love to follow the story with your twists and turns...
They had a subtle conversation...they gave nothing..

So he met her again...according to the concluding line, my imagination went wild. I don't know whether I am right or nor, but I would like to be surprised...

Originally posted by: srat

I am glad I never got around to watching the movies, i prefer reading anyway.. still intrigued and am of the strong belief it is our beloved couple Arshi, such a nonchalant conversation took place over a cup of tea... but so much was observed and described so vividly by him about her... look forward to reading how he visits her each night..

Originally posted by: -LiveCrazily-

It's mesmerizing

the explanation of girl face when guy eyed her face or say khushi face expression according to arnav thouhgts

i want to read more about gangster arnav singh raizada

they talk in such a light way and

She simply said what she wants for nothing extra and nothing more

said which necessary or to the point

can you show up the names of characters?

Originally posted by: __blossom__

Wow!
The way you write it so easy to picture everything infront of the eyes...like actually watching a movie...
Loved the update!
She saved him cuz she disnt want 'khoon kharaba' well i dont buy that 😉
and the last line scared me...in circumstances he never wanted to meet her...should i be scared?

Originally posted by: segad

chai banana aur peena itna romantic hota hai aaj pataa chalaa

Originally posted by: ...Doctor...

Ugghh! You love torturing your readers, don't you? Seedhe seedhe bol do na ki Arnav is a gangster & Khushi is his savior. Why aren't you revealing their identity. They are khushi Arnav right? Batao na, Rae *goes down on her knees & begs*

Patience, Alanki! And you should be well versed with me on this regard by now...remember how long (and unexpected ;) :D) the revealing of names was in YNTOO? *Whistles* ;) :D

Arnav, my boy, you asked all those questions which I wanted to ask. Keep it up! Now tell me what do you feel about khushi? Come on sweetheart, won't you tell me? :P

Story shuru toh hone do! :p

Khushi, beta, listen to me. You can't lie. Bas! So stop pretending that you saved him just to avoid khoon-kharaba *shakes head* Arnav ko dekhke kuch-kuch hua na? Huh? Tell me :D

Miss.Rae, please tell me where did they meet again? And what circumstances? *bites nails* I just hope Arnav will be alright.

Eagerly waiting for the next update!

P.S.- Though I have given some advice to both Arnav & khushi but I won't mind if you answer me on their behalf :P

I have nothing to say here except I love how you insist on calling the yet to be named people Arnav and Khushi. :p

Also, you know I dont answer questions which can be answered in chapters! ;) :D