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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Wow!
The way you write it so easy to picture everything infront of the eyes...like actually watching a movie...
Loved the update!
She saved him cuz she disnt want 'khoon kharaba' well i dont buy that 😉
and the last line scared me...in circumstances he never wanted to meet her...should i be scared?

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

chai banana aur peena itna romantic hota hai aaj pataa chalaa

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Ugghh! You love torturing your readers, don't you? Seedhe seedhe bol do na ki Arnav is a gangster & Khushi is his savior. Why aren't you revealing their identity. They are khushi Arnav right? Batao na, Rae *goes down on her knees & begs*

Arnav, my boy, you asked all those questions which I wanted to ask. Keep it up! Now tell me what do you feel about khushi? Come on sweetheart, won't you tell me? :P

Khushi, beta, listen to me. You can't lie. Bas! So stop pretending that you saved him just to avoid khoon-kharaba *shakes head* Arnav ko dekhke kuch-kuch hua na? Huh? Tell me :D

Miss.Rae, please tell me where did they meet again? And what circumstances? *bites nails* I just hope Arnav will be alright.

Eagerly waiting for the next update!

P.S.- Though I have given some advice to both Arnav & khushi but I won't mind if you answer me on their behalf :P

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Awesome updates! I can't wait to read more! Thanks for the PM! Please add me to your PM List. :)

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

awesome update loved it still have not reveled her name loving the mystery and how you are not reveling anything yet making us want more loved it awesome Rae bloody amazing thanks for the pm

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

So the man and the woman in the apartment are still nameless, and you leave us with a cliffhanger...so much mystery surrounding this story; and I can't wait to find out!!

So she explained why she brought him in the apartment, but how does she explain that she offers chai to a man who has a gun and is on the run from the police?There's some kind of intrinsic trust towards him, but would love to see what compels her to trust him.

I'm going to be out of town for a while, so will miss your updates (if you keep updating at this rapid pace)...but will definitely catch up on the blog after I come back!

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shr1234

@shr1234

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

She is smart, confident, innocent with an appearance that we associate to Khuhsi, so though you haven't yet revealed as such, it is certainly safe to say they are Arnav and Khushi. She so fearlessly told him that it was 'her' that 'brought' him and not 'let' him in. I liked it. I wonder whether our angel is familiar to the dark world as she was not at all daunted by his gun. Is that why he was surprised to see her again, in his own world?

I'm amazed at your ability to pen down mystery and thriller with the same fluency as romance and family genre.

Thanks for the PM :)

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suma.2911

@suma.2911

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

:) I could imagine a small, clean yet old and dingy kitchen, him and her standing apart and making tea, talking softly. An intimate affair.

A very astute guy too.

Nice nice..

Was reading this update and the song from Company came to my head- "Aankhon mein raho, saason mein raho, baho mein raho ya dil mein raho". One of the most pleasant songs I heard :)

Though I think they are still in "aankhon mein raho" phase :D

Have PMed you my mail id

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

just read the first two chapters...and interesting story...continue soon...

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#150

I know I'm late..You have already updated chapter 2..

I loved the prologue..

I have seen the film gangster..the good thing is I just can't seem to fully remember the story line...

Now coming to Chapters 1 and 2...

The way they met was totally unexpected...Khushi saving Arnav from the police...but why go to such length..is it just because she did not want to have any blood shed in the chawl??

And Arnav is going to meet her again that very night...Waiting for the next one!

Edited by meera06 - 12 years ago