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vks11

@vks11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Hi,

Can you please add me to your pm list. i loved the starting and I would like to read the story.

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rakhee12

@rakhee12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

thnks Rae for the lovely update. The story is slowly beginning to unfold now... Arnav is very protective of Khushi. Lets see what is in store for them in future

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

So she is part of his shady world unfortunately. Sad the feeling of helplessness that they both felt when they realized the other was there. But there is always hope is any situation an I feel he is taking this chance by watching over her from a distance and waiting for when the night will be over so he can take her away from there at least for the night. I love the way you defined the difference between his feelings / way he was looking at her vs the others. So will these 2 souls be allowed to explore where their feelings lead them to in this very dangerous world they live in? Can't wait to read more.

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Amita2014

@Amita2014

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

A Wow update.
Never did expect the scenario in which Arnav and Khushi to mee.
Good one Rae.

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

The unbeatable, the queen of guessing is here! Yes please welcome Miss.Alanki, who was adamant that the gangster was Arnav and the hazel eyed beauty was khushi. And now she has been proved right, how intelligent can someone be? Please clap for her 😆

Okay Rae don't kick me out, I'll not praise myself anymore. Promise!

They are Arnav and khushi *dances around the laptop* :P

I loved the update. Loved it!

First of all I can see Arnav is Mamu-jaan's favorite. Well its all okay but I don't want him to interfere in Arnav's personal life in any way. Lets see what's in store. I can see MJ is a strong character & his love for Arnav was evident.

As you know I always imagine the characters of your story, the first picture that came to my mind when I read about Mamu-jaan was of Rishi kapoor in Agneepath.

Secondly, I had imagined all the circumstances in which khushi Arnav could meet except this. I was shocked to see khushi like that :( God! Don't know how khushi manages to take those ugly stares, that bad smell & everything. But its her job and she has to do all this. I loved how she felt about Arnav, the way she looked at him, the way she pulled his jacket closer. Everything was beautifully written. She trusts him!

Arnav is a gangster but he has a good heart. I'm not saying this just because he helped khushi but the main reason is Shyam. He praised Shyam in front of MJ when MJ was clearly trying to criticize Shyam.

Looking forward to read more about Arnav & Khushi!

P.S.- MJ-Mamu-jaan :P

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

So now they are no longer nameless, really want to see how you create this story with your signature touch... Khushi self thoughts about Arnav were intriguing and only a real man deserves such praise ..

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yush-swt

@yush-swt

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

loved the chapter...so its Arnav and Khushi indeed...hmm atlast and i got one thing right...

so mamu jaan hah...why do i feel that he will have topmost hand in arnav and khushis story...and shyam, hmm i dont get good vibes on him as well...

so the girls come and she is there...i love this arnav he didnt look at her cos he felt that she would be uncomfortable, and she thought that he is ashamed of her and her profession...

the end was lovely...and khushis monologue was just beautiful...any girl even in normal circumstances would be drawn to a guy who protects her ...and this circumstances she definetly would feel safe...and arnav i love how he was so gentlemanly and all with her...so they go back togetherr...and knows each others name...

will be waiting to know what happens next..

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sruthiif

@sruthiif

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Arnav and Khushi indeed...
And I guessed in the same lines how their next meeting was gonna be...
I did not get positive vibes regarding mamu jaan...
As soon as Arnav saw Khushi, he dropped his gaze. Both their thoughts were completely different regarding this...
I am eagerly waiting to see how the story unfolds...
Thanks for the PM...

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

FINALLY Khushi Got Introduced :)

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#190

I was waiting for them to meet again but I didn't think that this will be khushi job! Maybe I should have understood from the way she saved him! Poor khushi! He felt sorry for her to find her in this situation but he didn't lose his respect for her and she felt safe with him and maybe it was the first time she felt like this. Both are living a dangerous life.
Thanks for the mail 😛