Through The Looking Glass| ArHi | Ch11Pg1 (14/08) - Page 10

Originally posted by: mistyrains

This chapter was fantastic. And so different, I mean how these two characters meet (I'm happily assuming away its Arnav & Khushi :P) Also,I love how you begun the chapter, laying emphasis on the man & what is going on in his mind whilst he is on the run. And I like her, the woman with the honey orbs, she is feisty, intelligent! <3

Originally posted by: sochanatha

first of all i loved the title of the story... its capturing..
and what an idea sirjee.. to mislead the officers...
let me take out a moment to appreciate the young lady for her courage and her sheer determination to save the man under hunt...
i think the cause of this desperate step is to be revealed in the later chapters..
though its an adaptation of the movie gangstar right now i am pretending i havent seen the movie 😛and gonna take each chapters as it comes our way.. cause its gonna be so much more fun that way!! ⭐️

Originally posted by: -LiveCrazily-

so that criminal is arnav and girl who changing clothes is khushi

Ok i somehow remember the story and Ya ali is one of the famous song of this movie

it is interseting to read about arnav khushi in this way

Originally posted by: wonderblake

I just wonder what really happened right now, I think the man who was forced to hide in the room was Arnav, but then how did a girl who is changing clothes get into the picture :D That scene where police barges into the room and stammering when they found a girl changing clothes was really hilarious. And that girl, whoever she is, has a very sharp tongue, or else who would have talked to the police like that. Definitely a mind blowing start. Can't wait to read the next chapter. And thanks for the PM :)

Originally posted by: khusiarnav

Awesome!!I love that movie so much!! And after reading the first chapter i am sooo lookiinggg forward to it!!
Not to mention how creative u r in writing which will leave us speechless!! Cant wait...
Update soon!!

Originally posted by: disha7

Very gripping story! thank god haven't seen the movie :P though have heard the songs which are just awesome! Would love to read more...will be greatful if you can add me to your PM list! thanks a lot and continue soon

Originally posted by: vrinda16

Rae u don't know how happy I was to c that u've begun with a new story & that too a FF...after 'Just a TV star' I was waiting when u would write another...Thank u so much Rae for thinking of writing again on our ArHi again & an adaptation of Gangster? Of course Rae count me in...I would surely want to read more of this & do PM me plz...I'm so glad to c u begin writing again...Welcome back Rae 😊 ...missed reading ur works

Originally posted by: dumas

interesting concept rae never saw the movie so can't wait to see what you are going to do loved the girl with the honey orbs feisty or anjali can't wait to find out add me in the pm list thanks for the pm congrats on the new ff thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: golpokobita

Gangstar is one of my favorite movies.. specially the songs are my all time favorite..

good to know that you are going to build an Arshi story on that plot. it would be certainly an exciting journey, i believe!