Through The Looking Glass| ArHi | Ch11Pg1 (14/08) - Page 11

Originally posted by: A_BA

Really like the concept of your story. Please PM for future updates if you can!

I'm assuming the man and the woman in the apartment were Arnav and Khushi...I wonder what compelled Khushi to help him out. For all she knows, he could have hurt her in the process...she already trusts him somewhat but she doesn't know him.

Loved her tactic to get the police out of her place. Again, she saved Arnav, but why??

I will definitely look forward to reading this story!

Originally posted by: shreyasonia

Eeeks!! Welcome back to IF.

Loved the prologue and chapter one.

Imagine the policemens surprise...Socha tha kya but what did they actually find. A good tactic to throw someone off their guard of course. Had she been all dressed and prim and proper they would have insisted they search the property.

Wonderful.

Originally posted by: Raila1014

I like this girl whoever she is - very quick thinking to save his ass. Why save him though? Is he intrigue from the glimpse he caught? If I was a fly on the wall, I think I would be buzzing with laughter at the cops walking in on an innocent woman changing her clothes! Clever, very clever. What will happen when the door is opened and they meet?

Originally posted by: ...Doctor...

I don't know how you do it but you write everything so perfectly, Rae. Be it mystery, romance, cheesy stuff, love, hate. I was so involved in the chapter that I didn't even blink my eyes while reading it. Felt like I'm watching these things happen in front of my eyes :)

So Arnav is clearly the bigger man & Shyam is not-so-popular kind of a gangster. Arnav is the most wanted criminal too. Sounds intriguing!

So who was this hazel eyed beauty who saved Arnav? *thinks* :P

I kinda know who she is but the main question is why did she save Arnav? She has never met him or maybe she has?

Does she know him?

Why did she trust him so much?

Come on, tells me! :D

And I loved the way Khushi shooed away the policemen :D

Continue soon!

Originally posted by: suma.2911

I had watched Gangster years ago and was hooked to "Ya Ali" for a really long time. I had also cried a lot during the movie. But it was one among the well made Gangster movies I have watched till this date.

Interesting start to the story. The part where they separate but do not desert was very nice.

So "she" helped "him". Now I don't know who is the she and the he. But look forward to finding out.

-whimisies

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Thank You! :)

Well I havent seen this Tamil movie but it sure sounds interesting! :p