Arhi FF: Unforgettable. Completed!!

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rana5

@rana5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Such a gripping tale. Arnav's heartbreak and Khushi's pain. Waiting anxiously for the next update.

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Wooww, He Just Told Her ; O

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daljeet

@daljeet

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Hey this is an amazinf FF. I love this. I would have missed it if I ignored it. Thank God I came upon this. This is interesting. You are doing justice to the story. But once the initial intro stage os over pick up the pace of the story.

This is a worth reading piece. Do continue soon and yea please pm me when u update next.

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xfan

@xfan

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Very nice story and you are really gifted as readers actually get involved in the story and can feel the pain of the characters. Loved the fact that Khushi doesnt trust Arnav despite her memory loss. In the serial I felt really cheated when Arnav was not made to suffer for misjudging Khushi.

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vann

@vann

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

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Irene

@payalpencil

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

nice!! :D I must read it from the beginning!!!! :D very good!

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arshiar8

@arshiar8

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

awww...

dat was v v v sad .. dat she is nt believing bt can recognize his smell , features ... bt dont remember him and he is in pain

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barfi

@barfi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

great going loved the intensity

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gopikaaji

@gopikaaji

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

😊...khushi 's confusion ..bleeding Arnav's heart ..i know he had hurt her but its all misunderstanding ..,..he had almost dead after she left ...the thought of lost of someone itself is a big punishment ...
yes she is familiar to his touch,his smell ...but not him...wat a state of mind...

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Its so painful and yet very beautifully written.

This line "The accident might have, helped to cause the amnesia, but the real reason for it lay deeply rooted in some other trauma she'd found she could not face on top of all the pain she had been suffering at that time." explains a lot about Khushi's behavior towards Arnav. She doesn't know what has happened but she knows it was something bad which she is afraid to face again. Nicely put.

Thanks for the PM :)