Originally posted by: risat
The last few lines rendered me completely speechless. I loved the way u wrote it. But why would Khushi be afraid of him and why this instant dislike? I mean when she had that accident before that she was trying to save Arnav. At that time she was in love with him and didn't hold him responsible for anything. Besides Khushi always felt comfortable and safe in Arnav's arms be it the time they used to hate each other. I understand that to Khushi Arnav is a stranger still I believe Khushi would not react in such a way when Arnav would approach her. If it was Shyam I think this reaction was justifiable. That's what i think. Other than that I really find this story very intriguing. Thanks for the PM :)
P.S.: Please don't mind my criticism. It just didn't set with me. I hope u understand. I love the story and u as a writer. Update soon
Thanks for your comment risat. It is valid. Why does she feel this dislike? Probably it is not just dislike but a mix of lot of feelings. She was always wary of him, scared, running away and this is the ultimate form of running away from the most monstrous accusation and to top it, he did not believe her. She might feel safe in his arms, but also expects him to be rude, hurt her. Se always retreats when he steps towards her aggressively...that might be romantic but it often also a reaction to his aggression.. Arnav has always loved her and been angry. And so was she, when she heard the accusations the first time...remember the confrontation...and then that anger just disappeared and she was once again left pleading and crying, then came the kidnapping, and that very legitimate emotion was suppressed in the plot.
Kushi has more right to be angry. I felt the need to do justice to that anger. Now amnesia brings out only emotions, no reasons because she is not aware of what happened. She feels attraction, familiarity but also anger and the wariness that were always a part if her relationship with Arnav. It was a pretty traumatic marriage...anyway, you can be mad at a person and still love them😊
Had it been Shyam, it wouldn't be anger. More like disgust, repulsion.
Edited by vann - 12 years ago
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