Arhi FF: Unforgettable. Completed!! - Page 12

Originally posted by: payalpencil

nice!! :D I must read it from the beginning!!!! :D very good!

Originally posted by: arshiar8

awww...

dat was v v v sad .. dat she is nt believing bt can recognize his smell , features ... bt dont remember him and he is in pain

Originally posted by: barfi

great going loved the intensity

Originally posted by: gopikaaji

😊...khushi 's confusion ..bleeding Arnav's heart ..i know he had hurt her but its all misunderstanding ..,..he had almost dead after she left ...the thought of lost of someone itself is a big punishment ...
yes she is familiar to his touch,his smell ...but not him...wat a state of mind...

Originally posted by: risat

Its so painful and yet very beautifully written.

This line "The accident might have, helped to cause the amnesia, but the real reason for it lay deeply rooted in some other trauma she'd found she could not face on top of all the pain she had been suffering at that time." explains a lot about Khushi's behavior towards Arnav. She doesn't know what has happened but she knows it was something bad which she is afraid to face again. Nicely put.

Thanks for the PM :)

Originally posted by: ameena671

wow great update loved it thank you for pm.

Originally posted by: rana5

In a way, I did not want her to go back with him. I would have rather she stay in Lucknow. Thanks for the update.

Originally posted by: daljeet

Wow I loved this plot. It is really interesting. Arshi's conversation had a freshness. I liked how you emoted Kushi's feelings. She, her insecurity, her fear all felt 'real'. There was an originality. Good job. Arnav, hmm I have to wait before I comment.

But I must say I liked his thoughts when she asked proof for their marriage. Had he told her that, she would have definitely felt something. But now, if she ever remembers...I hope by then Arnav has gone through his repentance and gained her love once again.

And yea what explanation will he give for not having any wedding album or even a photo together. Kushi is going to be clearly more confused and tensed. This is going to be a very interesting story. I can see that. Do put in your effort to the maximum.