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karsvinu

@karsvinu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

Welcome back Dear! I missed this FF n you too...It was a awesome update...yes he has miles to cross to reachout to khushi. Felt really bad after reading her past...n present was also not so great...i have seen often such things happen to only good hearted people...well happiness should soon knock her door😊 in the form of arnav's love.

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sanjubanju

@sanjubanju

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

So nice to have this FF back. Loved reading the update, thanks dear as usual wonderful update.

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sarrahyusuf

@sarrahyusuf

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#423

Yeah.. Finally u r back after. A long holiday..

The update was awesome..

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Milii

@Milii

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#424

I missed this FF sooo much...

Thanks a lot for updating...🤗

hope ur vacation was good...

and also hope now we can get frequest updates on this...😃

Coming to the update...it was awesome...

Khushi's past is so sad...I literally had tears in my eyes reading that portion...poor thing...lost everything at once...😭😭😭😭😭

I rreally really hope she finds happiness in her life...she deserves so much of it...👍🏼

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#425

Good to have you back. Hope you had a good holiday.

This is one of the best stories I've ever read.

Its so REAL.

Love affzirs between people from different class of people happen all the time.

But how many are successful?

Hope these two find happiness together.

I just love the way you blend the past with the present here.

Everytime Arnav and wkhushi are together, there is always a memory of a dimilar incident from the past.

This makes the story so unique.

Now I'm just waiting for the next update to know what Arnav will do next.

PS.- I loved the last sentence of the update. It summed up the difference between Arnav and Khushi very well.

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mishal07

@mishal07

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#426

beautiful update as always😊

khushi's past iz really terrible.

and now what arnav will do,there are many barriers😕

waiting for the nxt part

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#427

Welcome back first of all 🤗

Khushi's childhood was written beautifully though was painful!

My thought on that is - Suicide is the not the solution to anything!!

Next, she found a friend in arnav after months of her loss.

Their childhood memories are sooo cute & adorable! I can't help & aww at them <3

Now the present, khushi gave into the kiss letting lose herself in the moment!

Arnav did realise his more than friends feelings for her or not? I am cnfused at that thing or u have used that 'Like a lover' phrase just to tell us about his inner feelings?

The last part was kinda sad!

Arnav got all the attention & no one even bothered to know abt khushi!

Aww his dadi is so adorable <3

P.S. As much you love writing it, we more than that love reading it😉

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-Roshini-

@-Roshini-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#428

First of all welcome back.very emotional update

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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#429

Finally I read the whole chapter.

That was a wonderful chapter, in which you have explained very well why Arnav is a pillar in Khushi's life. I never like the way she depends on Arnav, but I didn't try to understand why she's like this. And I think I will never be able to understand her, as I can't relate myself to her.

When she was left all alone two persons were there for her : Buaji and Arnav. And I think now she's in front of a dilemme because she has to choose either Arnav's love or Buaji's honour.

She loves Arnav, he represents everything for her.

She's grateful toward Buaji who didn't abandon her.

Who is she going to choose ?

I sincerely have no idea. I'm completely confused at this stage of the story. If you didn't put the FB in this chapter, then I would have said she'll choose her Bua, but now I've realized she won't be able to stay far from Arnav. However I don't think she's selfish enough to go with Arnav abandonning Buaji and she learnt from her.

The chapter was amazing, Arnav is completely in love. He's blindly in love and he wants Khushi to be a part of his life, but he forgets many things which surround him, especially Lavanya. (No doubt she's going to enter the FF really soon, maybe the next chapter).

I loved the way that Khushi finally said Arnav. That's big step, that means the social gap between them crumbles.

And the last part was very meaningful. Arnav was between his family and Khushi, and very easily his family got the upper hand. Arnav was unable to do anything. I hope very soon that Arnav would be able to stand up for his love. (thank God Dadi is here 😉)

Amazing chapter, very well written.

🤗🤗

(Hope Mars journey went good 😉)

Edited by Agathe - 12 years ago

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Anne

@Anne_ArHi

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#430

Hi,

I've been following your story for a while and today I could no more allow myself to be a silent reader. I'd to let it all out.

So, let me begin this way,

I'd been wondering all this while, that why Khushi is so obsessed with Arnav. When he went away, she could have moved on or her memories could have faded away with time.

So many questions were answered in this update. Arnav had touched Khushi where no one had ever, other than her parents of course.

Khushi could never forget the warmth she had felt in his embrace. I guess, that was why she still longed for him. And then, she was broken though she fought it.

In this update, my heart went out to Khushi and then came back for Arnav.

Each update of yours makes my heart calm and raced together.

The way you write, describe and narrate each incident touches my heart, honestly. I think about your story, in the day and at night.

I donno about what others think but for me, this story is one of the most wonderful Fiction ever written in IF.

Can people stop reading those romantic and gutter stuff and see this Story. Every update has something for each reader to know and realize.

Arnav has miles to cross before reaches his love, his life...

You've no idea how hard it is for me to express what to comment on this story.

The Scene about those special children whom Khushi helped and then something stirred in Arnav seeing that, made me ponder over that particular scene again and again for days altogether.

Yes, your writing does that to me.

I feel that me here in IF, reading a FF has been all worth it when I read your story.

Your writing, language, grammar, feel, and touch is very graceful or rather beautiful. There is no competition to this story.

Thanks for writing such a wonderful story yaar! I simply, adore it!

I'll always remember this story, I bet!

How long have I typed? Need to stop, right!

So, I would conclude by saying that...What? I donno! LOLz...

Bye.

PS. I'm Anne. Your New Reader.

Edited by Anne_ArHi - 12 years ago