The Trampled Butterfly #3 check index for Th4 link - Page 20

NAHII!! break?? With that ending?? Haay devi maiyya! Kitni zaalim hain yeh duniya!! LOL! :D Have a good time on your vacation to Mars! :)
KYUN KHUSHI KYUN?? Why do this? *sniff* Now I'm all heart broken that was so perfect!! They might not know what they are doing right now but I do!! Why did she back away?? *sniff* Arnav you better work double hard to woo Khushi! And please drop Lavanya!!!!
I have this insane image of Khushi in a yellow anarkali suit. Like the one Kajol wears in DDLJ in the second half! Sorry my brain is not working! :P

as usual great update

hi , i am so glad that you are back with ur new ff .ur mirage was such a thriller romantic story.ihad fully enjoyed reading it. lately i came to know about the trampled buttetfly , and read all in one go.such cute childhood memories arnav and khushi have.u make us cry and laugh with them by ur narration of story.the hilly mussorie add charm to their cute love story. dadi and RK are so sweet . now u ended on a cliff hanger ,i just cant wait to read further. come soon after ur vacation.

Hey Rachael, I came across ur ff today accidentally & have read all the parts up till now non-stop. This is a suberbly written story & I'm totally hooked to it now. You write so beautifully. The orphanage scene or the scenes where Khushi is trying to convince herself & Arnav that she's a mere servant to him now really brought tears to my eyes. They were so emotional. I'm loving their slow changing relationship from bumbling strangers/ex-best friends to almost good friends & now to hopefully being friends & lovers.
Though I've a sinking feeling due to fear of her past, society & their status difference Khushi won't let that happen so easily. She's going to fight her feelings & Arnav till he somehow manages to break her defenses down & make her accept them. Atleast I'm hoping that's what he'll do citing that's the obvious thing to do. Hey but it's ur story so u might take it anywhere. I'm just enjoying this wonderful masterpiece & can't wait to read more. Enjoy ur well deserved break & have fun. But being ur new reader/fan I demand( with joined hands) regular, lengthy updates after all the rest & rejuvenation :)
p.s- I didn't liked the last kiss, is she really saying bye as Arnav asked her to???????

congrats on new thread...

.My dear will u update one chapter pls . I am missing it 😭

Oh no ... I hope all will b well soon

missing you Rachel😭

how are things at Mars? Do they know about IPK? Arshi? Sobti? I love you dammit?

Just one more update perhaps?? 😔