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sanjubanju

@sanjubanju

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Hey, I have read Mirage which was an awesome FF. I came across this FF yesterday and simply loving it. Your writing is so beautiful. I feel Khushi's loneliness in my heart . I wonder what's in store for them . I am loving Dadi and Ranvijay's character here. Waiting eagerly for your next update. 😊

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tanu45

@tanu45

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

loved ur ff...something different.

update soon.

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sruthiif

@sruthiif

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

How the hell did I miss the update??You updated on 16th and I am reading it on 20th?? What the..!!

Anyways, it was the longest update so far... and the update was awesome...

Dadi... you are just awesome... I know you know that...

Arnav gave her a birthday she wouldn't even forget in her dreams...

A cliffhanger?? I really really hope that kiss is not going to be a good bye kiss... it will be just breaking... but temporarily only...they are just inevitable no matter how much Khushi is gonna be adamant not to let her feeling sin...

Happy vacation... have a safe trip...

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outland_123

@outland_123

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

So, u r going for vacation...gud...

I've one info...I've heard that all the vacation resorts in Mars booked already...so...

nice update as usual...rain scene was simply magical.

specially the way u describe abt their two different world & Arnav closing the gap between two worlds was awesome...& the kiss ofcourse.

will wait for u...wish u have a wonderful & energetic break.

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

I just caught up with this story...beautifully written...I like the play between the present and the future ...and how you stick to your characters' character through various situations...beautifully written!!

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

ML... What can i say about this update. One cant express appreication for perfection in mere words. Atleast I am not that good a wordsmith.

So...I can only dedicate the silent awe after reading this update to the amazing writer that you are. I am really glad I have been lucky to be a part of this journey right from the start... else I would not have had read THIS particular Update... and Man...what a miss that would have been.

Enjoy your holiday...and let us know how space travel was once you are back 😉😆.

- Khushi.

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

congrats on the promotion :D

beautiful update

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mayabhi

@mayabhi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Hi, I have read your mirage and its one of my favourites stories. I came across this by chance and I'm soo glad that I had. I read it all in a go and I love it. It's soo real and intriguing. I don care anymore what had happened. I just want her to have her happiness to balance the years of sorrow n solitude. Enjoy ur vacation.

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831628

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Chap 17 fantastic as usual. Brought tears with Khushi's turmoil and her position. Will wait for the turn of events.

Will be waiting for your update.

Have a wonderful vacation.

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cool_zephyr

@cool_zephyr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#190

Read it in one go. Im glad I found this FF.
This is the first time im reading your work and must say you are such a brilliant writer and your narration is very picturesque and actually felt I'm seeing it rather reading it and loved every update of this FF and it just touched my heart and gave a very serene feeling after every update. Arnav and khushi's characters are very well etched and felt Mussoorie is the perfect backdrop for your story. Dadi is my fav of course after our beloved arhi. Even Ranvijay sounds interesting.
I laughed while reading their childhood memories, smiled with them and also cried with them when they are in pian. But at the end it gave me a feeling which I cant describe in words.
Just awesome and looking forward to read more of it.
Enjoy your break and holidays...