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chibisuke

@chibisuke

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Titaliya_AP
First off let me tell you how much I love you for continuing this...
I love you this much *spreads arms out wide!* :)
And I already loved the earlier Khushi/Arnav POV's I'll also love this one <3

*my arms go wider!!*

I'm flattered you think you'll love something even before reading it!

Originally posted by: Titaliya_AP
So this is for chapter one...
That was amazing!! I love how you're just taking the event from the show and making them deeper :)
Poor Khushi, you've create the perfect amount of respect and sympathy for her,
And Arnav, you've created a create we can't love or hate here and that's brilliant! :D
I want more! Meaning longer updates :D Pleaseee!
Also I'd love to see some of your own ideas, like the party idea was amazing! Loved it <3

Yup, I will introduce a few ideas of my own, but generally it follows the timeline of IPK. Because its easier to follow the story that way! More than fiction, its a re-tell, a remake, a remix 😉

Longer updates???

*sigh*

Okay, I shall try it!!

P.S.: I am glad you are own of the few people who is confused about THIS Arnav. 😆

Originally posted by: Titaliya_AP
Res for Chapter Two (Quote this one)
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Yippee <3 I love quick updates!
But them I hate cliffhangers >.<
I feel like ASR, all confused with my feelings :P Lol.
Ok so I love the "Oh ASR" and "Oh my ASR!" Hahaha!
This update was perfect, things are changing, Arnav is at that ever present self battle within himself... Never letting anyone in. Even if they do come in them he shuts up out at the first chance...
Just like with Khushi.
So you've given their little games a new meaning. Khushi's becomes a traditional wife so she can be near him but not expose herself and be vulnerable to him.
I loved the scene we he mouths Khushi and he turns around! :D
All in all a brilliant update... I'm excited and afraid to read what Arnav saw happen...

I quoted it!

And yep..a cliffhanger! *rubs hands in glee*

Hehehe..those things are just a distraction, a way to lighten the update!

Thanks for thinking it was perfect, gal! Its an honor to hear that!

Well, things are changing, but we have a long long way to go...

Thanks for the love, dearie!! 😳

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: aman3354
Sorry, got late for commenting...:-( had classes from 6 to 11 am...

You have classes in the morning!!!?? 😲

Originally posted by: aman3354
]U mentioned my name in ur update not once but twice...THANX..a lot...I just shared my thought with u that i love that scene & i was a little sad..just a little...that u didn't mention about that scene in chap 1..But u mentioned it today...& that also so beautifully...Love u lot Di...Eagerly waiting for next chapter...

Well, as I had said, you reminded me of that incident. And many people liked the fact that I included it in the update. So, yup, the credit goes to you!!

Shall post the chapter today!

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: nilu_sarunholic
loved the update
awww u r continuing it am happy :) :)
thanks for pm

Thank you for liking it so much, that I HAD to continue!! I'm happy to have readers like you!!

Originally posted by: 1rocks
Awesome update...

We all know that the savior would be non other than Arnav !!

Do continue soon !!!!!

Thanks!

A question for you: Was he really her savior? 😉

Originally posted by: arshi_sravy
Aaarghhh! You made me miss IPK even more!
Awesome update! Love how you are using scenes from the show and going deeper..

Thanks a lot for this!!! I hope my story compensates for your I-miss-you-IPK feelings!! 😆

Originally posted by: Omoraboti
Bookmarking

Oh My God! I am flattered!! 😳

Originally posted by: arshi-pooja
U r story tellin is indeed good..
Lookin forward for more

Thank you for saying that! I hope you like what I write in the future too!

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: cheesemad
amazing update n m late again...thank u so much for including my fav scene...inner turmoil of ASR...m missing him so much today...i never liked much all these plots after the marriage track...n i hated that swami track...i don't know what but there was something missing in those tracks...u completed them...i love this ss of urs...can't wait for the next update...helee just a suggestion sis if they ever make ipk2 plz be one of the cvs..

Its OK, gal! You seem to have a reversed sleep pattern, and I post in the mornings, usually.. So it happens! Don't worry!!

Chalo, your favorite scene came up already.. 😃 Me happy!

You really think I can write that well??? Oh My God!! ☺️

Thank you for this wonderful support Komal! 😳

Edited by hmtxyz - 12 years ago

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: sk2405
OMG ! Changing emotions in a split-second. I could read something like a myriad of emotions so subtly put in their conflicting minds.
I always wanted Khushi to call that creep without 'ji' in the show which apparently never happened so thank you for that.Waiting for the next one. 😊

Khushi is probably stronger than we give her credit for, at least in my story. She will face troubles, but not as naively as in the show!

I am so happy you liked it!

Originally posted by: P4rveen12
Fantastic and brilliant update, Loved reading the update about Arnav's confused inner thoughts, they were so funny and hilarious. Awww love the fact Khushi called Arnav swami and through all his formal clothes away and replaced them with the Hawaii shirts, absolutely brilliant.
Arnav is so cruel he told Khushi the reason for not telling her he got his voice back because he did not want to give her any credit, poor Khushi.
I can't believe that vile man Shyam had cornered Khushi in the kitchen, but I'm glad her saviour came on time, but the question is did he see Shyam. Eager to read more, love this story.
Please continue soon, Thanks for the PM xx

I simply used the original storyline and twisted it a bit.. I am glad you liked what I wrote!!

You have asked the right question, my dear! Let's see what Arnav has thought of it!

Will update today, pakka!

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: PhenoixTears
Oh dear, both chapters were absolutely delightful, had so much fun reading them. Loving the confused ASR and pretty dimsel Khushi. It was hilarious as well as emotional to see Khushi in pain. Thanks for the PM, updates were PREFECT 😊

Thank you gurl! I am glad you've liked it so far! I hope you stay with me on the journey to completion of this SS.. 😊

Originally posted by: BARUNODAYA
Reswa.. 😃
~unres~
the way you blending the beautiful nok-jhok parts we have in the show here is awesome..cant wait for more..

Thank you very much for this!!! 😊 I feel happy that you like it!!

Originally posted by: BARUNODAYA
So arnav wil get a hint that kushi is innocent or he wil hurt her more after this?

Correct question! 👏

Answer in the next update!! 😆 *Evil laugh*

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Res for Anju!!

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Originally posted by: Titaliya_AP
First Yayyy<3 it was super long and I loved it <3

Ok beginning to love ASR's point of view a lot more than Khushi's...

I mean, I understand both. But ASR is such a complex character and to show that is hard and you're doing great! I just love reading it.

The small moments with her and her family. So monumental in totality but so insignificant now...

The kitchen scenes! Both of them are so amazing... ASR finally is using his brains ^_^

Oh the If Only's will kill me!

He wants her. She wants him. And I want them togetherrr<3 Hehe :)

Oh no... Storm :(

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Heliii<3

So I'm too lazy to quote and I'll just reply the points that need replies :)

I LOVE YOU DAMNIT<3

And I'm always confused about ASR! Lol, I mean you make me want to hate him, but come on! He's ASR I CAN'T hate him. Also whenever someone hates him they don't think of the why behind his actions!

I mean his anger does lead to bad things, but think about why he is always so anger and why he always look for a chance to run away from emotions like love.

But don't get me wrong, I don't feel any different from Khushi. Both are uber dynamic characters :)

And yippee *mwah* for longer updates :)