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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
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Lol now I got two chapters to read!
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Edited: I LOVED this chapter and the length was an absolutely treat <3

Why am I not surprised about the Shyam scene. But knowing ASR and how stupid he can be sometimes, believing only the things he wants to believe, the scene was justified. Poor Khushi! Her husband is dumb! dumb dumb dumb!

Coming to the first scene...aah Fancy dress! I love the way you wrote and explained Khushi's side of story here. And what followed was...written even more wonderfully. With everything he said, the thoughts of Khushi which followed were just heartbreaking. You are a wonderful writer, you know.

And Arnav, oh Arnav... I loved how you explained how he's gelling with her family. The Gupta house track was just lovely. I loved how he admitted that he had started calling her parents as amma babuji in his mind but just couldn't bring himself to say it out loud. #RESPAAACT!!

And ha ha...so Arnav enjoys it...her sleeping habits. Mujhe toh pata hi tha... he doesn't say anything, bass mazze leta rehta hai 😆

Very lovely update. I want to say many things, but since just so many thing were mentioned, I just can't pinpoint them all.

But you know the relationship Arnav and Khushi shared in the show always reminded me of a song called 'Seekho na' by Shubha Mudgal. And today while I was reading the update...I sort of started humming the tune...

Edited by Anarocksick - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
loved the update..
ARNAV is fighting with his won inner thoughts!!
i love the way you wrote about KHUSHI and her feelings!!
Edited by tushi0310 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
wow beautifully written dear 😳 loved it to the core...
do continue soon
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
"Were you lost in your dreams again?"
Dreams? I stopped dreaming a long time back, Mr. Raizada. But yes, I was lost in your fond memories.
😭

I wish I was the director of IPKKND I would have definitely make shyam pay😡
awww I love arnav for that...I know he loves khushi' family if only he trust khushi

The Laad Governer won't know what hit him.
Scratch that. He'll know what's not hitting him- Water.
🤣🤣 lol!!!

I make sure he is showering. Yep. the water is running.
Why can't he sing too?
Huh! Laad Governer kahin ke
ROFL!!!
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

arnav and singing lol!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣


I love arnav he cares a lot for khushi I know his insecurities hope in next update arnav finds out the truth

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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Beautiful update..
I lovd the monologues of arshi..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
OMG i love this!!
absolutely adore it~!! so wonderfully written!! wow
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
awww well done
that was very well written my dear
i loved it 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Finally edited my comments. Sorry for being late...

Comment for chapter 2 on page 9
Comment for chapter 3 on page 11
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
I LOVED the update as always... 🤗
BEAUTIFULLY written...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
I LOVED the part where Arnav was asking questions to khushi when she got hurt...& khushi's innerself was answering them..LOVED this part the most... 😊 😊 😊
If only...If only there would be a first aid kit that Amma could provide for my broken heart ? Ice to soothe the pangs that my heart felt when he hurts me!! 💔 Oh..God..!! these lines really touched my heart...Love you..!! for giving us such wonderful updates..!
❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Edited by aman3354 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
SO Beautiful . Arnav Yearning For Khushi's Teakwondo Poses 🤣

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