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ashw99

@ashw99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

wow that was amazing loved every bit of it specially his yearning for her to sleep all over him.
Loved Arnav's all the thoughts.
Thanks.

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ashw99

@ashw99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

wow that was amazing loved every bit of it specially his yearning for her to sleep all over him.
Loved Arnav's all the thoughts when she was hurt, also about her family.
Thanks.

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

gr8 update as usual...

aww that heer ranjha scene...i loved it...

u have very well described the love hate relationship of arshi...

loved that question answer round between arnav and khushi's heart...

the best thing about todays update was the way u showed arnav getting mixed up with khushi's amma, babuji n buaji n getting acquainted with their life style...

"Amma! Let me sleep for five more minutes please!"

awww poor thing..i wanna hug him tight..

khushi getting back to her naughty mode...😆

finally arnav has an inkling of khushi's innocence...aaj suraj kaha se nikla hai??😲

continue soon n thanx for the pm...

Edited by cheesemad - 12 years ago

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: hmtxyz

Its OK, gal! You seem to have a reversed sleep pattern, and I post in the mornings, usually.. So it happens! Don't worry!!

Chalo, your favorite scene came up already.. 😃 Me happy!

You really think I can write that well??? Oh My God!! ☺️

Thank you for this wonderful support Komal! 😳

yup helee u r absolutely correct...i follow american standard time here in india😆...obsessed with winchesters specially the big brother😳

i don't think u write well, i know u write well...

u don't have to thnk me babes...🤗

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Deepti

@deepti1906

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

awww such a lovely update... the whole scenario looked so homely...

I always wanted this to happen in the show as well.. You remember when Khushi burnt her hands on second day of marriage and mami taunted her?? I so wanted him to look concerned but it didn't happen...😕 and you did it in a wonderful way...👏 Believe me, it couldn't have been better..😊 The way she was answering his questions in her mind just made the things more perfect for me...😊

They both are hopelessly in love with each other. She loves him with a love that sees no flaws, find no fault, knows no bounds...

Yes, real love brings pain. Real love means sacrifices and hurts and all the thousand shocks of life. But it also means beauty, true beauty. and I'm just waiting for the day when they would be together...❤️

and that day he won't fake his sleep when she would be sprawled over him...if you know what i mean 😉😆 But it looked so cute... but the way she was sleeping, touching him here and there was *ahem* and apna Hotwa was enjoying it too...😉

and I loved it when he called Khushi's Amma even if it was in his mind, and the way he took care of Babuji and caressed his head... It was utterly beautiful...😊😊
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But your last line made me worried... I guess I know what is going to happen.. She would come to know about the reason he married her...right??

I just can't wait now... Do update soon...😊

P.S- Earlier comment edited on page 9 😊
P.S.S- Love you for such a long update...❤️ XOXO 🤗

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Wow thank you for slightly longer update, it was an amazing read.

Loved the update it was fantastic and awesome,

Love the fact the update gave us a clear understanding of how Arnav feels about khushi, it was written perfectly.

Awww you included the heer ranjha scene and Arnav telling khushi he only helped her because of the family and khushi crying did still affect him and khushi thinking the part where she has died in the play did affect Arnav a lot, very strong emotions.

Loved the part in the kitchen, khushi burning her hand and Arnav showing her care and affection, but it does not take him long to turn into ASR and be harsh.

Wow loved the part where he called khushi's mum Amma, that was such a sweet and touching moment.

Khushi's sleeping positions are superb and even Arnav has got use to holding her whilst sleeping is so adorable.

So Arnav did see Shyam in the kitchen and did notice a worried khushi, I'm glad he has decided to get Shyam investigated, can't wait for him to find out the truth.

Loving khushi's checklist for annoying Arnav, but turning of the water whilst Arnav is in the shower was fantastic, eager to read his reaction.

An exceptionally well written update and eager to read more,

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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Nicky saluja

@Nickysweet

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

😊 thanks for pm i like your update. Arnav pov is well written. Hope she know the truth soon about her marriage

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Piyali

@love.piyali

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Awesome yaar...plz pm me weneva u updt...

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BARUNODAYA

@BARUNODAYA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

It was awesome dear..

Kushi is much stronger than arnav when it comes to emotions and hardships..contrary to what they trying to portray to the outer world...

Cant wait to c where wil kushi end up while executing the plan "100 ways to irritate lard governer"..