*Awarded* ArHi SS: If Only | NEW Note P43 - Page 6

U r story tellin is indeed good..
Lookin forward for more

OMG ! Changing emotions in a split-second. I could read something like a myriad of emotions so subtly put in their conflicting minds.

I always wanted Khushi to call that creep without 'ji' in the show which apparently never happened so thank you for that.

Waiting for the next one. 😊

Fantastic and brilliant update,

I'm late :| Res-ing here. Will update my comment later (feeling like a sleep-deprived zombie right now...not that I know if zombies sleep or not).
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Edited: Firstly, sorry it took me so long to get her and comment. The thing is none of the authors I follow update so quickly..so I'm simply not used to seeing updates so soon 😆
And, ohh, you didn't need to mention me there. I was just giving my vishesh tipanni on a particular scene from the last chapter. lol. But since you did, thank you.

Now coming to the update...

Boy! Isn't our Mr. Raizada totally attracted to his mrs? 😆 Seriously, the first bit was hilarious.

Khushi gave him a silent treatment? Ha! - He totally deserved it! In the show I always felt like Khushi should give silent treatments often. Because... you know how Laathon ke bhoot, baaton se nahi maante xD. When Khushi wouldn't talk to him, and go missing for a long period of time, would be the only times he would realize her worth.

And...I, too, believe that Mr. Raizada suffers from the split personality disorder. One personality belong to the time after diwali and before the terrace scene and the other one, from after the terrace scene. This being the split personalities in the show. However, here, it's just ASR and Arnav 😃. And I'm loving the little fights between ASR and Arnav.

I'm so glad he saw and noticed her expression. Poor girl. While I feel for Arnav, Khushi was the one to whom I wanted to go give her a tight warm hug and tell her all about why the Lard Governor had married her. Suffering and not knowing the cause is the worst thing ever.

And Omg the last scene! He saw her with Shyam? Off to read the next chapter now!

Oh this was such a treat to read- I know there were painful parts and yet, ASR's split-personality is hilarious. Hope you update soon! Waiting :)

Oh dear, both chapters were absolutely delightful, had so much fun reading them. Loving the confused ASR and pretty dimsel Khushi. It was hilarious as well as emotional to see Khushi in pain. Thanks for the PM, updates were PREFECT 😊

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just read it now... i'll edit my comment later...😊 have to do revisions for my today's exam... 😔

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Hey my lovely sista..😃 Didn't come online and i missed 2 updates...Damn..😲

haa, But i got to read two-two updates together...😉
and you know what? I have already fallen in love with this SS...❤️😃

This is what I wanted to read from a very long time... and i just loved the way you portrayed every emotions... Arnav's inner termoil, his confusion, Khushi's agony... every single bit of it...❤️❤️


And now do I have to tell you what a brilliant writer you are...??😉

Originally posted by: ssyahoo

I'm glad you decided to turn this into an SS! Loved Khushi's point of view and Arnav's as well.

One of the reasons we loved Khushi was her resilience which she portrayed beautifully.

We had classic Arnav thinking about how to use the situation to his advantage. Made we reminisce the IPK days :)

Can't wait to read more! Great job!

Originally posted by: kajulove

I can't see him unhappy. He can't see me smile!...in this line I wanted to bang ASR's head with some iron rod or a heavy leather shoes,...was he that blind...he can't even see the innocence of khushi...and thats gave chance to that sorry excuse of a human shyam😡

Yup, he was blind.. he was blinded by his own prejudice. And he found it easier to trust his "jijaji" than trusting Khushi.. My next update should help explain that!

So arnav wil get a hint that kushi is innocent or he wil hurt her more after this?