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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

I'm glad you decided to turn this into an SS! Loved Khushi's point of view and Arnav's as well.

One of the reasons we loved Khushi was her resilience which she portrayed beautifully.

We had classic Arnav thinking about how to use the situation to his advantage. Made we reminisce the IPK days :)

Can't wait to read more! Great job!

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

For Anju too

Originally posted by: Titaliya_AP
Res for Chapter Two (Quote this one)

--edited--

Yippee <3 I love quick updates!

But them I hate cliffhangers >.<

I feel like ASR, all confused with my feelings :P Lol.

Ok so I love the "Oh ASR" and "Oh my ASR!" Hahaha!

This update was perfect, things are changing, Arnav is at that ever present self battle within himself... Never letting anyone in. Even if they do come in them he shuts up out at the first chance...

Just like with Khushi.

So you've given their little games a new meaning. Khushi's becomes a traditional wife so she can be near him but not expose herself and be vulnerable to him.

I loved the scene we he mouths Khushi and he turns around! :D

All in all a brilliant update... I'm excited and afraid to read what Arnav saw happen...

Edited by hmtxyz - 12 years ago

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Cute update-wa!!!!☺️ Shikha loves itt!!!

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KBS

@oKBSo

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

This is what the great ASR has been reduced to. Tip toeing around his own house, in his own room!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Well, you can always shut her up, you know. Its actually easy.. give her a plate of jalebis. She'll be quiet for a long time after that.

Except the occasional moans of.. *gulp*.. pleasure. Her lips coated with sweetness. And the way she licks the syrup from her fing..

uh...oh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! control hormones arnav !!!!!☺️

You must look like a camel. Craning your neck here and there
indeed u look like a camel ASR🤣

The water was running down her naked body. Her perfect body. She was rubbing the soap all over with her hands.. touching her neck, her shoulders, her brea..

☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️...OMG!!!!

I can't see him unhappy. He can't see me smile!...in this line I wanted to bang ASR's head with some iron rod or a heavy leather shoes,...was he that blind...he can't even see the innocence of khushi...and thats gave chance to that sorry excuse of a human shyam😡

ok now don't tell me ASR saw shyam in kitchen and now he will again torture khushi

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Nicky saluja

@Nickysweet

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

😊cute update i like it thanks for pm update soon

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

First off let me tell you how much I love you for continuing this...

I love you this much *spreads arms out wide!* :)

And I already loved the earlier Khushi/Arnav POV's I'll also love this one <3

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

So this is for chapter one...

That was amazing!! I love how you're just taking the event from the show and making them deeper :)

Poor Khushi, you've create the perfect amount of respect and sympathy for her,

And Arnav, you've created a create we can't love or hate here and that's brilliant! :D

I want more! Meaning longer updates :D Pleaseee!

Also I'd love to see some of your own ideas, like the party idea was amazing! Loved it <3

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Res for Chapter Two (Quote this one)

--edited--

Yippee <3 I love quick updates!

But them I hate cliffhangers >.<

I feel like ASR, all confused with my feelings :P Lol.

Ok so I love the "Oh ASR" and "Oh my ASR!" Hahaha!

This update was perfect, things are changing, Arnav is at that ever present self battle within himself... Never letting anyone in. Even if they do come in them he shuts up out at the first chance...

Just like with Khushi.

So you've given their little games a new meaning. Khushi's becomes a traditional wife so she can be near him but not expose herself and be vulnerable to him.

I loved the scene we he mouths Khushi and he turns around! :D

All in all a brilliant update... I'm excited and afraid to read what Arnav saw happen...

Edited by Titaliya_AP - 12 years ago

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tvserial2012

@tvserial2012

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

I am so glad that you continue the story from OS to SS. The best part of your writing is charecter's POV . their inner emotions and thought and how that represent in front of others.
Thanks for an awesome update and PM