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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

loved the update!!
it reminded me the old days!!
i miss ipk badly like everyone else..
i love the way you write..
from characters POV..
waiting for the next update..

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

simply fabulous
loved it
keep writing😛

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KBS

@oKBSo

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

please please update...omg I damn exited to know what will happen next
Argh that creepwa snakewa shyam 😡 why he can't go and jump off a cliff instead of doing rani sahiba rani sahiba!!!!!😡

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Your OS got back all the old memories of the show. Looking forward to read the other parts as well. 😊

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chocodilla

@chocodilla

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Only one word - Awesome!
Thanks for making this a SS.

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: aman3354
I really loved this update..!!
I had already liked the post reserved for chapter 1 'coz I know it will as damn superb as was ur other works before...
This voice gone part is 1 of my fav. parts in the show...especially a scene where both arnav & khushi were outside the RM, Khushi was walking in front of arnav, he calls khushi by her name..khushi at once turned around feeling that arnav was calling her...I love this scene...
U know, what i like about ur writing that u write in Characters POV.
Till now i had read stories where narrator tell the story...
From my point of reading i love reading from char. POV...
Eagerly waiting for next chap...
Take Care..!!

Hehehehe

Thank you Amandeep! You flatter me to no extent! And I am going to use what you just told me, in my next update. To be honest, I had forgotten that part completely!

I am glad you like this style of writing!!

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Anarocksick
After the marriage track began, there have only been a handful of sub-plots I liked. And this was one of the good ones...Arnav losing his voice! (Though I hate the part where he makes her do sit-ups. Not justified enough in the show I feel.)
And it was quite funny actually, and sad when Khushi gets to know that he'd been faking it for the last few hours just because he didn't want her to get any credit.

I loved Arnav's inner thoughts where he justifies to himself that whatever ASR is doing is right. LOL. Seriously, it's kind of hilarious!

But uh-ho, Khushi heard him. And she looks hurt. And it bothers Arnav.

Can't wait to read more!

And thank you for starting this so soon

You've already decided on the chapter titles? Quite a planner you are, eh? And I love the titles! Kind of shows how it'll progress...can't wait!

Yup, I named all the chapters, because there was no other way to plot out what I wanted to write 😆 I'm glad you liked them!

This part, and the next (where she annoys the hell out of her Swami) were the two funny episodes I remember.

Honestly I had forgotten the reason he hid his recovery for. I thought it was because he wanted to worry her some more, but when you pointed it out, it was suddenly very clear to m! 😆

I am really happy you like what I've written, Ana!

Thanks!

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: cheesemad
omg m super late this time...was busy with batman😉
m so so so happy that you decided to convert this os into ss...you have already decided the titles of all the chapters...
coming to the chapter 1:
u have written amazingly well...
poor khushi has to display confident and happy facade in front of family... i always feel bad for her... she does all the crazy things to irritate arnav but the moment she comes to know he is hurt she takes care of him genuinely...that is what i love about her...
awww ASR is enjoying all the attention he is getting...admit it ASR u love it wen she takes care of u...he is the most complicated character i have seen ever... somewhere he knows that khushi is innocent but his mind overpowers his heart every time...
the thing i liked the most about the ss is that you have written from povs of both the characters...and readers know what exactly is going on in their mind...
i found chapter 1 awesome..it was far better than what cvs gave us on the show...it was amazing...
continue soon n thnx for the pm😊

That's OK gal.

Yup, I have written down the name of the chapters, hopefully they won't change 😆

Thanks a lot for your compliments, I am actually ☺️

I hope you like what I write in the future, too! And I shall be updating in a couple of hours.. So I hope you read this message and don't get late (if you don't want to) 😉

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: P4rveen12
Thank you so much for turning this into a short story, brilliant idea.

The update was brilliant and amazing, written perfectly.

Awww Khushi put the coil out and poor Arnav has lost his voice,

When Khushi found out at first she was happy but later Anjali confirmed his allergy, Khushi was actually horrified and felt so guilty,

Loved how you wrote the update in both of there point of views and absolutely loved there thoughts and personal monologues they were simply amazing and superb,

I can't believe Arnav actually made her do sits up and he had been lying that his voice had returned in the afternoon, poor Khushi looked hurt.

At least Arnav did like the way Khushi cared and showed him attention.

Eager to read more,

Please continue soon,

Thanks for the PM xx

It is I who have to thank you guys for making me do this.. Don't thank me!

Or if you do wish to thank, simply read what I write and tell me what you felt. And that is something you already do..

I'll be updating soon!

Edited by hmtxyz - 12 years ago

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: tushi0310
loved the update!!
it reminded me the old days!!
i miss ipk badly like everyone else..
i love the way you write..
from characters POV..
waiting for the next update..

Thanks a lot!

I have taken the actual story and tweaked it a bit. I miss the show, too. It was a passage into dreamland for me..

Thanks for liking what I write!

Keep commenting!