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KBS

@oKBSo

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Yes, they did. Can't you see how it was the need to provide the best for them that drove him to achieve so much? And this need for success made him use both straight and not-so-straight means.

If they wanted, his family could have well nurtured him, and taught him the importance of being a good human being before becoming a successful businessman. They could have taught him what is right or wrong, and admonish him when he was doing wrong.

I agree with you in this!!!!
that was awsm

real arshi in it...yes arnav needs khushi and his family
you are awsm👍🏼

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

beautiful and truly wonderful.. waiting for the net part...

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Luna

@luv_panipuri

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

loved the update. Particularly Arnav part. But i would have loved it even more if u had included Arnav's love confession part. If it is convinient for you please include that part in flashbacks. I would love to know how our 'Hotwa' confessed his love and also his pain.

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

loved the update dear 😳 beautifully written...

thanks for the PM

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nilanjana

@Nilanjana_20

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

wooow girl u r really fast huh

it was brilliant i loved it to the core

waiting for next one

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ashw99

@ashw99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Congrats for your result 😊

Updates were wonderful.
I always felt Arnav suffered more than everyone else because of shyam.
Infact i think he was protector in disguise for khushi if not for him to stand between shyam and khushi, shyam would have destroyed khushi and Anjali easily with his evil mind and sweet talks. Actually to some extent even khushi was responsible she kept everything hidden from him, loved all the answers you had for khushi's questions.
Yeah, Aman got not only hug but also rise from ASR also Akash he was actually there for his brother unlike in ipk a pole.
I like Anji here atleast she could see the true face of her husband.
Loved this chapter thanks for better version of ipk.

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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

This is written so well. Anjali has a significant part, without being a wet blanket.I wish you could send this to the CVs and star plus- this is how a story is written. Please let things be fine between them :)

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--MISHTEE--

@--MISHTEE--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

Loved d update
Thanx for pm

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#159

gr8 update as usual...

best part was the anjali's dream...i loved the way u described her plight after finding his husband is a cheat...i loved it so much...i wish cvs had done something like that in the show too...khushi and anjali sleeping together...indeed they need each other..i really hate shyam for doing this to two beautiful souls...

Arnavs pov is well written too...he told everything to family...what i liked about this part was u closed loose ends of the story which our cvs didn't even bother to...

naniji, mami, akash i am missing every one now...

Arnav hugged aman...omg i loved this...

How dare shyam do this to my ASR??helee kill him...plz make him die in the story...a**hole...😡

loved that poolside scene too...

Once I was done, she held my hand and guided me to the bed. Surprisingly, she sang a sweet lullaby, that made me sleep.

this is our khushi...khushi whom i adored...loved her reaction..I think this is what our ASR truly needs..he is scarred due to his past n he really need someone to tell him that everything will be okay he just need to let it go...

God bless that pundit ji...

Finally two broken souls found solace in each others arms...

moral of the story i enjoyed reading this part thoroughly...n loved pretty much every thing as usual...

continue soon n thnx for the pm...

n i need a treat...u scored well

partyyy🥳