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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Hey...First of all ur update was not up to the mark..But quite above the mark..👏.And all the best for ur results...Hope u come out with flying colours...

Loved the update...

Thank god i mean thank u that Arnav now knows the truth...When u wrote that u r gonna introduce a new character i was a bit scared...But then i realized it was Aman...and i really loved his views...

Iam really happy that Arnav saved Khushi...n Khushi is safe now...Now i know its hard to forgive arnav but i hope she does...😉

Thnx for the PM and do continue soon !!!!🤗

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Arnav knws the truth 😳

Mr. Shyam Manohar Jha itz payback tym 😡

loved the update

waiting for the nxt part

thanks for the PM

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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

If only Arnav had killed Shyam. What a creep.

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nilanjana

@Nilanjana_20

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

aaah finally the truth is out

i loved it looking forward for next one

thanks for pm

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sruthick

@sruthick

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Jst strtd 2 read...
Awesm updates...Beautifully writtn...
So finally Arnav find out d truth...
Shyam s d culprit nd Khushi s jst a victim...
Nw Arnav s in guilty...
Nd that Shyam tried 2 rape her...!!!
Thank god... She has d strngth 2 lock him in a room...
Lovd this story...:)
Cntinue soon...
Nd plz accpt my frnd reqst nd do PM me wen u update

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chocodilla

@chocodilla

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Thank god! Arnav came at the right time.
Are we in for redemption?
I would love to see Arnav pining Khushi! Sadistic pleasure!😈
But don't make my hottie suffer too much! 🥺🤣

Awesome SS. I am loving it❤️

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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Sorry I know I am behind but catching up ..Here are my comments on Chapter 2

Another great chapter!! Love how Arnav is in a foul mood, about to chew HPji off, and the thought of Mamiji watching it all with a tub of popcorn brought a smile to my face! 😆

Loved his inner turmoil and his toughts drifting astray when Khushi is in the shower.

And of curse Khushi's part - I loved the swami scene in the show. How she throws all his clothes away and to irritate him. I loved how you ended it, with her terrified of Shyam. And of course her savior, Arnav indirectly coming to her rescue!

Will read 3 & 4 soon 😊

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Wow that was a brilliant and fantastic update,

So Arnav finally found out the truth from the investigators report, so glad he knows Khushi is innocent. Awww he felt so guilty, wonder how Khushi will react when he tells her the truth,

Love the fact you included Aman's point of view and he actually got to see a very vulnerable Arnav and he even heard him sobbing, but I'm so glad he called Akash and told him the truth.

I can't believe that scum Shyam was going to force himself of Khushi and had changed the property papers as well, well done Khushi for locking the pathetic man in the room.

So finally shyam's truth is revealed to the whole family, hope Anjali deals with it in a strong way and not stay in her bubble.

Eager to read more and how Arnav seeks khushi's forgiveness,

Loving this story, amazing writing.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM,

The update was written perfectly and agree with your note at the end, did not agree with the cv's regarding the suicide track in the serial.

Good luck with your exams results and hope you pass with flying colours xx