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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

it was simply amazing
loved it

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

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--MISHTEE--

@--MISHTEE--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Loved d update

beautifully written😊

Thanx for pm😊

Yay am first

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

lovely update as usual...

anjali found her life partner in aman n is happy with her family...

finally khushi n arnav found happiness together...n now they r going to be parents...awesome...

khushi totally knows how to pacify arnav n make him happy...doesn't she?😉

best part was when arnav took khushi to the mandir after getting the news of pregnancy...aww that is so sweet of him...

And the final miracle happens when he bows his head in front of the Lord's idol.

loved it

a beautiful journey came to an end...m totally with u for not stretching this story unreasonably...

waiting for a new story from u...😊

Edited by cheesemad - 12 years ago

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

😃

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Firstly, I'm really sorry for un-resing so late.

This chapter was brilliant! It had everything and more. I simply loved it!

I loved Arnav in the first two scenes. 😆 He was super-cool, yo! And behaved like such a newly wed. Super cute.

The flashback was very nice. I loved Arnav's confession and his acceptance of things. Khushi was so strong in the scene. Arnav sounded like such a vulnerable kid. I wanted to hug him!

And coming to the *ahem ahem* scene. Woman on top, then man on top, and then both under water (I mean shower) 😉 👍🏼 Loved it!

Last scene was so lovely!!! I think I loved it the most. It was almost dream-like.

I am married to a man who is brave, yes, the world fears him.

Kind, but only to good people.

Just, yep.

Loving? To his loved ones, yes.

Caring? To the point that you feel he's not taking care of himself when he takes care of you.

Fun loving? His ideas of fun have made me bold and blushing.

Filmy? He will never accept it, but he is filmier than me. Grandiose and dramatic. To the T.

👏 It's not even funny how true that it.
@Red - 😆 I agree! Arnav is sooo dramatic and filmy.

He stops, to my surprise, at the Mandir. And then he climbs up the stairs with me.

And the final miracle happens when he bows his head in front of the Lord's idol.

You know, I'm not a very religious person. And I don't believe in going to temples. But hey it's Arnav! And for him to this for Khushi is just... I loved it here, and I loved it in the show.

Great part! This SS was wonderful. And I understand the need for you to end it where you did. Sometimes, you just can;t stretch things. Can't wait to read more from you.

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Just ound this story and read six chapters at a go.

Your take on situations taken from the serial was interesting.

Loved the way Arnav repented for his wrong doings.

I also loved his equation with Khushi's family.

I do hope Khuhi will forgive him and accept him as her soulmate.

Maybe Anjali will also find a new beginning with Aman?

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Deepti

@deepti1906

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

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comment for chap 5 edited on page 26..
will edit my comment later for last chap. reasons mentioned in last comment...😆 🥱

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After 14hrs of much needed sleep, I guess now I can think more precisely...😆

The ending couldn't have been better...👏 A perfect ending I would say...

I'm happy that the scoundrel was no more in their lives... But felt really awful when I read about Kaavya... I can't even imagine how everyone must have felt and especially Anjali...😭 That was another huge blow in her life after shyam but I'm glad she found Aman...😊

Arnav and Anuj were absolutely adorable together...😃 Anjali wouldn't have come to know about Anuj 'Baat Ta' because it sounded more like the brand 'Bata'... So Arnav need not to worry about that...😆

And Arnav has created a lill minx.. now, had he?? That part was... was *Ahem*...😉☺️ I guess by now Mr. Raizada must have taken 'contol' of Khushi's sleeping patterns...😉🤣

Amongst the list of many, I wanted to she Khushi's Babuji fit and fine but the show ended before that...😔 But everything is fine now...😊

Her Babuji has recovered from paralysis, Anjali is Happy with Aman, Arnav beleives in God

and Arnav-Khushi are together forever and are going to have their little bundle of Joy...:')

That was really really Awesome...👏

Thank you for such a wonderful SS...🤗 But I'm really going to miss it now..😔

So, when are you planning to write more, my dear sista...??😉 I am hoping to see you posting your wonderful work soon...😃

P.S- I'm glad that your result was good...:) Keep Smiling and Kepp Writing...😊

XOXO 🤗

Edited by deepti1906 - 12 years ago

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damon fan

@-damon-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

LOVED...LOVED...LOVED..the ending...end better than this is impossible...You did a wonderful job 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...when i was reading this update i was thinking that whether you will write about Arnav's faith in God or not ? U wrote about it & that also so BEAUTIFULLY...LOVED it..a lot..🤗Till now i had read stories where arnav bowed in front of God when Khushi is in ICU..U know that type of emotional scenes.. This was toatally different..!! 👍🏼 For this wonderful ending i want to say 3 words in my native language- 'KAMAAL KAR DITTA...!!'
Daily...when i return home from my classes..the first thing i used to do was to open ur bookmarked thread..!! Oh God..!! I will miss this story very very much..!!
I just want to know that whether u r going to give us another os or may be a ff..!! If u r.. I'll very happy...!!
Yaa..we will stay connected..!!
Lots of Love..!!❤️❤️❤️

Edited by aman3354 - 12 years ago