*Awarded* ArHi SS: If Only | NEW Note P43 - Page 17

Wow that was an amazing and mind blowing update, written exceptionally well.

Loved how you wrote down Anjali's, khushi's and Arnav's inner thoughts and emotions, they were written down perfectly.

Anjali's dream was really sad, it started of as a beautiful dream but ended up as a nightmare.

Poor Arnav has been feeling so guilty, awww loved the part where he was crying and Khushi thought he was hurt.

I'm glad he told Khushi the truth and she actually realised he was so broken and distraught, she actually sang him a lullaby to make him Sleep, beautiful moment.

Loved the way khushi described Arnav's feelings and emotions and her own inner thought questions to her self were amazing, especially the following;

So do you want to chose satisfying your ego by making him grovel and beg for your forgiveness, feel better by seeing his distress; or do you want to teach him how to love you?

Loved the advice the pandit gave to Khushi it was brilliant and Khushi realised she is going to give Arnav another chance and help them get out off the pit they have all fallen in.

Loved the update, eager to read more.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

P.S. Congrats on passing your exam, well done Hun I am proud off you xx

What a wonderful way of depicting what all of us wanted in the soap...kash aisa hi kuch hota ...waiting for your next update.

woww i m loving this ss very much...

Chapter 4: I totally agree with not having the suicide attempt track and all because definitely Khushi is not weak. She can be the child-like woman but when required she can be the most matured on in the house.

That was so beautiful Helee... <3 Made me cry... :'(

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Sorry for the late edit... But finally my egg-jams are over..😆

Anjali's dream nearly broke my heart... But then seeing Arnav in that state did it for me...Listening to a sad song while reading just added more emotions to it... I couldn't stop my tears...😭 I CAN'T see Arnav and Khushi in this state..😭

That was really heart-wrenching... I'm glad to find that, two women who had to suffer because of that scum, sought solace in each other...

It was the most painful update...😭 You wrote it so awesomely, that it stirred so many emotions in me...

I wanted to write more.. but literally have no energy left in me and my mind's not working at all.. aftermath of exams i guess...

I hope this short comment would suffice this time... But that was one of my fav. chapters uptil now...:')

XOXO 🤗

Updated my comments page 20 and 23 :-)

That was very emotional...😭
Arnav s comptly brokn...
Nd Khushi 4gv him...
So...slowly evrythng s gettng back 2 norml...

Awesome part
thanx for the pm
Twinkle