Arhi FF: Destiny Games (upd note on pg 1)

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anera

@anera

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#661

hey beautiful
and dadi dtays as alwyas aBITCH
oh you are not the only one who hate sheetal we do too
love it
i really want khushi to be strong plz not like showing that she cared
plz
and i really want to know about aman
aman and khushi
and anrav😡

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jisa

@jisa

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#662

read your note,...
trust me i don't n never had a problem with the pace of the story..
infact i kinda liked this story at first place because of this pace...
this gives ample time to grab the situation...
so go on...don't change the pace...
n as for sheetal...don't make her a good one...
i don't think i can digest a good sheetal..
sheetal is mean...kind of a bit self-centered...don't make her sacrificing...
i don't want to think good about her..😛

w8ng for update...!!!

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monsi08

@monsi08

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#663

hey vi .. thanks . n i dont need any explanation.. for me the story is going clear ..superb n m enjoying it thoroughly 😊

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vinu.sr

@vinu.sr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#664

Originally posted by: preethi.saseeda
Abavi, I am not sure on how you came into those conclusions with few comments... I have been following your work since Checkmate days... N never once you have failed us as an writer... You are doing an amazing job in DG, JT and WH... I love all of them and in no way I am feeling any confusion with any of your stories...

Please don't feel bad... Be assured you have great fans here who can relate to what you write very beautifully... DG is one the best FF's in IF now... Please don't take any drastic decisions or come to conclusions like this... The story is not moving in a slow pace... N I dont mind Sheetal here, because I know I have signed up for Arnav n Khushi story and I am having it... No complains from my end...

Now that I know how you are planning to end it... I am sad... Please please please dont end it at their First Kiss... Please no, I want more from this story and I know this story has more potential... You being the master of twists can easily accommodate our wish... Please...

well said preethi...i wonder too who can complain about DG? If Arnav and Khushi are all over each other already then where is the mazaa? I am loving this concept here where abavi has shown a different Arnav...not the usual "brooding angry man who has had no serious girl friends...only flings in the past...blah blah"...I actually like the fact that like any man of his age and background, he has a girl friend...and Sheetal may not be perfect for him as a partner...but that doesnt make her any less of a companion to him in his world...

having said that I still dislike Sheetal 😆 and love anjali's rant 😆 BUt please lets not be in a hurry to get rid of her...she is adding too much spice to the story and I dont want that to end soon 😆

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#665

Originally posted by: vinu.sr

well said preethi...i wonder too who can complain about DG? If Arnav and Khushi are all over each other already then where is the mazaa? I am loving this concept here where abavi has shown a different Arnav...not the usual "brooding angry man who has had no serious girl friends...only flings in the past...blah blah"...I actually like the fact that like any man of his age and background, he has a girl friend...and Sheetal may not be perfect for him as a partner...but that doesnt make her any less of a companion to him in his world...

having said that I still dislike Sheetal 😆 and love anjali's rant 😆 BUt please lets not be in a hurry to get rid of her...she is adding too much spice to the story and I dont want that to end soon 😆

I am with the two sisters👍🏼

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vinu.sr

@vinu.sr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#666

Originally posted by: Eccentrica

I am with the two sisters👍🏼

yay!! and you figured out we are sisters 😊

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#667

Thx for the looonnnggg note abavi
Will wait for ur update

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smilejans

@smilejans

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#668

Read your note. I loved how you took the characters and leading the story. Am still in awee how showed the entry of payal. Me cracked on floor while reading.Am very fond to that girl, how you potrayed in your story.Bold and mature at same time seriousnes. as well,am enjoying, wen they all gathers and pulling off each other.

About pace, it adds the beauty for story.

About sheetal, dnt have any pbm. we all know, who going to whose atlast. but we dnt have idea how? wen? That would be your Destiny Games.

Hope will get update 2day or on monday😃

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710617

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#669

Originally posted by: vinu.sr

well said preethi...i wonder too who can complain about DG? If Arnav and Khushi are all over each other already then where is the mazaa? I am loving this concept here where abavi has shown a different Arnav...not the usual "brooding angry man who has had no serious girl friends...only flings in the past...blah blah"...I actually like the fact that like any man of his age and background, he has a girl friend...and Sheetal may not be perfect for him as a partner...but that doesnt make her any less of a companion to him in his world...

having said that I still dislike Sheetal 😆 and love anjali's rant 😆 BUt please lets not be in a hurry to get rid of her...she is adding too much spice to the story and I dont want that to end soon 😆

I love destiny games.. If the hero heroine confess to their love..I lose interest ..in the plot.. The mazza is the realization to love.. Please do not hurry up towards end.. Give us twist but more frequent updates... Make sheetal very good... That will be fun.. What is the fun in dumping a vamp..make her as good as Khushi..

Let Arnav twist and turn to explain why Khushi and why not sheetal..

Edited by msin - 12 years ago