Arhi FF: Destiny Games (upd note on pg 1)

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Arilip

@Arilip

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Posted: 12 years ago

#671

Hey I never thought u failed to explain Sheetal as Arnav 's choice ,I feel the story is well written. It's only human to get attracted towards a person who suits all ur expectation. Only when u meet someone who means more than ur fixed expectations frm life partner u feel love...

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Sarita Kaur

@kaur94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#672

will be waiting, i quite like the pace in which this story is moving :)

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Alannah

@Alannah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#673

the story is wonderful even the pace!! so dont worry

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#674

waiting for monday!!

truly speaking I didnt see why the justification came! I mean for me the story has justified itself! about both your points! :)

Cheesr

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#675

Love the pace and their journey

keep it up and looking forward to the update

and it is your story so ofcourse write it the way you want and imagined it😊

P.S. your note wasn't needed for me as i already knew what you justified there so your story is giving the impact you intended too

Edited by ayshaomar - 12 years ago

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#676

the running commentry stole the show.. too good..

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limitless

@limitless

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Posted: 12 years ago

#677

Where are you... Please update na 😭

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#678

I love 'Destiny Games' and the pace story is moving...please don't finish it any time soon. I also like the pace it's going at, I mean you are very nicely explaining everything while taking the story forward. Characterisation is brilliant and intact.

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varshapan

@varshapan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#679

i think most of us are all ok with the pace of the story.. actually love it. the journey. more to explore the characters and what makes each of them tick and makes them who they are... take all your time.

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#680

Amazing updates... I absolutely love Anjali , NK and Payal... I enjoy reading Payal's cheeky answers.. n of course Anjali's running commentary was fabulous... As for Dadi, I just dont like her... there is no delicate way to say this... She might love her grandchildren and want the best for them but the way she is treating Khushi just because she is poor is absolutely disgusting... I am actually amazed by the way Khushi is handling it...

coming to Arnav , he obviously cares for Khushi.. whether he accepts that or not is totally different story... Im not sure he even realizes how much Khushi has come to mean to him... all in due time I guess...

Finally Sheetal.. Its very hard to like her... not because she is a bad person but just because we will always be rooting for Arnav and Khushi and any third person between them will never be received well.. Having said that she does seem a little clingy and superficial, which obviously doesnt help things... Anyways will wait till we find out more about her...

I loved Checkmate and so far reading Destiny Games has been a lot of fun... I like this always bickering acting like they are 12 Arnav Khushi... The pace of the story is perfect... 😊

Update soon... will be stalking the thread😊