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sangeetha

@sangee_manan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Tamana, who told u dat u wnt write emotional part gud, its realy a emotional os dr..i read a 3 parts at one go...its realy a awesome os dr..wooh so hurt my rey nd taani,nt able to bear it...loved gang response to tr break up..m feelng bad for taani's past... Please update next part need patch up of tr.pls..do pm me.nd thanks for pm

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asha rani.B.S

@Asha_Tacker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Tayam,ds sis-bro alwys vows me wit tr empathizng nature.D pain wch ws kilng cng Tani in pain & Tani tryng to cheer up hr bhai ws 2 gd.Rey bng so sad yet nt regretng hs decisn & bng firm though its hurtng is much appreciable.Wtng fr nxt update.

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Sneha

@Mohit_monaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

jus caught up wid all the parts...

really amazingg...

lovedd the concept alot...

and esp the way u scripted everything out...

jus loved it...

eagerly waiiting for the next part..

update soon and please do PM me =)

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tamanna-azaan

@tamanna-azaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

i am sorry guys for late update... since my exam was going on i wont able to update... here's the next part of my ss(i converted this os in ss)...
PART 4
next day in college gang(taareyam) were present in canteen.. discussing about taarey...
neha: neha thinking taani and rey ek saath kitne acche lagte the...
sharon: what do you mean by the????
vicky: ab unka breakup ho gaya hai...
simmi: and i dont think ki itna hurt hone ke bad taani rey se bat bhi karegi...
nil: i agree with u...
aashi: pata nahi taani abhi kya types feel kar rahi hongi..
bharat: wo bura feel kar rahi hogi aur kya...
all glared at aashi and bharat... sharon give shut up look to both of them...
sharon(thinking): i knw taani abhi sahi frame of mind mai nahi hogi... wo bohat sensitive bhi to hai... aur uska thik hona abhi sabse jyada jaruru hai kyuki agar rey ne usse upset dekha to wo aur tut jayega... waise hi uska past janne ke bad wo bohat guilt feel kar raha hai...
sharon: guys hume taani ko cheerup karna hoga...
neha: ya sharon is right...
vicky: hum rey ki burai karte hai... taki taani ko break up ka bura na lage...
nil: dude par isse rey hurt hoga...
sharon: and tum sab bhul rahe ho rey is our friend hum uska burai nahi kar sakte..
amar; pal taani bhi to hurt hui hai...
swayam was standing at the entrance of canteen he heared all the conversation of gang... after hearing vicky he came forward and said...
swayam; ye sab sunne se taani aur hurt hogi...
simmi: what do you mean ???
swayam: bhale hi taani aur ey ka break up ho gaya hai... par taani abhi bhi rey se oyaar karti hai aur wo rey ki burai nahi sun payegi... kyuki relationship status change hone se feelings change nahi hoti...(he said this lines luking towards sharon)
vicky: jai ho swayam baba ki... kya line boli hai...relationship status change hone se feelings change nahi hoti...
gang start to laugh... swaron are having eye lock... after few seconds he said...
swayam: ye meri line nahi hai...
vicky: teri line nahi hai to kiski line hai...
neha: neha thinking kisi movie ki hai...
while gang were discussing abt the line... swaron were caught in eye lock... sharon came to her sense after few minute... sharon want to stop this topic... so she said...
sharon: stop it guys... just focus on taani...
gang: ya...
gang was discussing abt taani... just then taani enter in canteen...
taani: hi guys..
gang: hi...
swayam: taani tum kaha thi... ghar se bhi jaldi nikal gayi...
vicky: kya yaar tu taani se kitna question karta hai...
bharat; abhi to iska koi lafda bhi nahi hai rey ke sath jo tu itna sawal puch raha hai...
by hearing this she remember her break up... and ran from there... gang stared at bharat who was feeling guilty... just then rey entered in canteen and he heared all conversation and saw taani going out from canteen towards girls locker room... so he called sharon...
sharon: hello...
rey: sharon maine sab sun liya abhi canteen mai jo bhi kuch hua...
sharon; tum kaha ho..(she start to search rey... but he is hidding behind wall)
rey: wo sab chodo... tum bas taani pas jao...
just then a girl entered in canteen and went toward gang...
girl; wo taani...
swayam: kya hua taani ko...
girl: wo girls locker room mai hai bohat ro rahi hai... pls jakar usse sambhalye...
gang was shocked hearing this... rey also heared everything... his eye becomes teary... he want to console her,hug her and want to tell how much he love her but he cant...
rey(in phone): sharon maine sab sun liya hai... pls call cut mat karna... aur taani ke pas jao..
all ran towards girls locker room... boys stop outside and girls went toward taani... taani was cryig very badly.. she was sitting in corner of the locker rum... since haron and rey was in cal so he heared taani crying... he was feeling like killing himself and tears were flowing from his eyes... he said to sharon to control taani... sharon was trying to control her but all went in vain... after sometime sharon get at idea... she hold taani's hand drag her from locker were shocked
taani: aap mujhe kaha lekar ja rahi ho...
sharon didnt answer... girls also went behind her and when she came out.. all boys are feeling bad by seeing taani's swallon face and shocked by seeing sharon and that also she is dragging taani toward terrace...
swayam: sharon tum kya kar rahi ho... aur taani ko terrace mai kyu likar ja rahi ho...
sharon stop and starred at swayam and by expression she told him not to ask anything... so swayam stop and followed her... all went to terrace... all are seeing sharon with confussion..all want to knw what she want to do... rey was watching all this from distance
taani: aap mujhe yaha lekar kyu aaye ho...
sharon: jao jakar jump kar lo yaha se...
gang: what???
swayam: sharon tum kya bol rahi ho...
sharon: swayam pls... mai tumse bat nahi kar rahi... (swayam shut his mouth)... so taani jao apni life ka end kar lo... yahi karna chahti hona...
taani: nahi sharon aisa nahi hai... mai unke liye apni life barbad nahi karungi jo mujhse pyar nahi karte... lekin unke liye jiyugi jo mujhse pyar karte
she said these thing looking toward swayam... swayam became emotional and hug her... all other also became emotional... rey who was watching them was feeling bad becoz his taani think that he doesnt love... but only he knws how much he love her... how uch he miss her...
sharon: to taani tum itna ro gi to tumse pyar karne wale kaise khush rahege..(think rey kaise khush rahega)...
taani: aap thik bol rahi ho sharon ab mai nahi rogi... bhai ke liye...
gang: aur huare liye...
taani(with smile): ha aap sab ke liye bhi...
all goes and hug taani(except swarn)... sharon saw rey who was standing at a distance... he thanked her... and she gave welcoe expression... swaya notice sharon expression.. he turn where sharon was seeing... and he saw rey standing their with teary eyes... swayam think wny rey is here.. he think that there is something between sharon and rey which he dont knw... but by seeing he was confirmed that rey luv taani then why he did break up... rey didnt notice swayam and went from there... sharon saw that swayam had seen rey... swayam give a question look to sharon but she ignored... all gang went to canteen...
swayam: sharon mujhe tumse baat karni hai...
sharon: ha bole...
swayam: yaha nahi...
sharon; abhi nahi...(sharon knw what he want to talk about)
swayam: sharon pls...
sharon: ok...
they went to projector room... they were silent for sometime which was broken by sharon...
sharon: ha bolo kya bolna tha...
swayam: tum janti ho mai kya puchna chahta hu...
sharon: kya...
swayam: sharon pls... mujhe pata hai rey taani se pyaar karta hai...
sharon(shocked): tumhe kaise pata...
swayam: agar tum bhul rahi ho to mai tuhe bata du taani ke bhai ke saath saatha mai rey ka best friend bhi hu... aur mai usko dekh kar bata sakta hu ki wo taani se bohat pyaar karta hai... to phir ye break up kyu...
sharon: wo swayam...
swayam; sharon please jhut bolne ki kosish mat karna... kyuki mai tumhe bhi bohat acche se janta hu...
sharon; ok... ye sab rey ne taani ke liye kiya...
swayam; matlab...
sharon: taani rey mai kuch jyada involve ho gayi thi ki wo apne bare mai aur career ke bare mai kuch nahi sochti thi... taani apne career ke bare mai soche(cut by swayam)..
swayam: isliye usne breakup kar liya... itni si choti bat ke liye usne break up kar liya...
sharon; bas uske career ke liye nahi balki uski khushi ke liye break up kiya...
swayam: sharon pls mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha...
sharon: rey dar gaya tha ki agar future mai rey kuch ho gaya to taani apne aap ko kaise sambhal paye gi... kyuki taani ne aapne aap ko rey pe fully dependent kar liya tha... wo nahi chahta tha agar furure mai wo taani se dur chala gaya to wo jeena chod de... rey ye dar aur bad gaya jab usse uske past ke bare mai pata chala...usse laga ki usko pyaar taani ko weak kar raha hai... wo taani ki taakat banna chahta hai... kamzori nahi...
swayam: wo meri behen se itna pyaar karta hai aur maine rey ko bohat galat samjha... apne best friend ko saajne ai galti kar di...
sharon: wo taani se bohat pyaar karta hai... wo taani hurt karke pal pal ro raha hai...mujhe pata taani aaj aise dekh kar wo kaise tut gaya tha... jab bhi wo taani ke aankho mai apne liye nafrat dekhta hai to usse kaisa lagta...
and telling this sharon start to cry... swayam also had tears in his eyes... he wa feeling guity for what he said to rey... he didnt able to understand his best friend who is like his brother who supported him everytime... just then they heared a sound... they saw taani... who fell down on her knees and tears are continously flowing from her eyes which ha pain,guilt love and many more feeling... swaron ran towards her... swayam hold her by her arm... she was sheivring...
swayam; taani...
taani said nothing and went from there... swaron followed her...she was just walking as a lifeless body...conversation of swaron are running in her mind... she remember their breakup... their lovely moment and she mu rey... she was feeling guilty more than that she was angry on rey... she was searching for... he went towards RH... all gang are present their... all are doing practice and masti... but rey was standing in ac corner... with pain in his eyes and lost somewhere... she want to go and hug him, she feeling bad seeing rey like that... but she can do that becouse she is angry with him... swaron also came in RH following taani... they rey lost somewhere and taani staring him... she went toward him... now all gang notice taani and where she was going... all were confused... she stop in front of rey... rey come out of his thought and saw taani in front of him with teary eyes and anger is clearly vissible in her eyes...
rey: taani tum...
before he complete taani gave a tight slap to rey... all gang were shocked... rey closed his eyes as he think that becoz of what he did to her she slapped him... swaron were also shock as they knw taani was hurt but they didnt expect this... and before any one can say anything she slapped him again... and hold his collar...
taani: rey aap aisa kaise kar sakte ho...

so i end part 4 here... hope u all like it... and next part will be the last part... please guys comment and hit like... in previous part there were very less likes and comment... itna bura update hota hai mera ki itne less likes aate hai... i used to pm more than 100 buddy pls at least 60 likes to banta hai...

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srivi01TRpmlist

@srivi01TRpmlist

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Hope they solve the differences soon

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riachandnani

@riachandnani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Amazing update!!! Loved the way sharon took care of taani ! Taani slapped Rey haaaw!!!!!! Waiting to read more thnxx for d pm! 😊

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-CussTheWorldUp

@-CussTheWorldUp

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Oh my god! 😲 She slapped him? Gosh! I didn't expect that! Why did you have to end here? Please update soon..

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Viji.Chandran

@Viji.Chandran

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

nice update...

taani n swaym finally cm to knw abt the truth...

plz update soon

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samiha

@samiha_taarey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

awsome update... bt ye kya itni crucial moment par end kar dia!!!!! nt done yar...taani slapped Rey I also didn't expect it bt chalta hai after all pyar ka thappar hai...😉 eagerly waiting to read the last part... do update soon