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raddhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

wow man it was emotional

my rey yaar all were crying

n i luv taaron convo n swaron convo

n i luv tht taani came to know truth n nxt

prt is last prt nahiii kk make it but romantic

in shot in rey style plzzz thanks for PM

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Ankita Bora

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Gr8 update!!

Loved the tasha part!!

But why did taani slapped rey...saara gussa nikal raha hai lagta hai...!!

I totally understand actually!

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asha rani.B.S

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Gang plng to cheer up Tani ws nice.Tani hurt again rembrng Rey.Rey,he's in so much pain cng Tani hurt! Sha,swtst bhabi hlpng Tani to cope up! Swa lrnt d truth of Rey & he's guilty.Tani hrd evrytg.Oh my,2 slaps fr Rey! Damn excitd!

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anitasharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Great update dear
waiting for next part

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tamanna-azaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

thanx all my readers for like and comment... here's the last part...
PART 5
taani: aap aisa kaise kar sakte ho...
rey: taani...
taani: aap ko kisne haq diya mere rey ko hurt karne ka... unko dard mai rakhne ka...
every one is shoked by hearing taani... the most shocked person was rey...rey didnt understand what she was saying... but swaron understood what taani was trying to say... taani was sobing very badly...
rey: taani tum kya kehna chahti ho...
taani: mai ye kehna chahti hu Mr. reyansh singhania ki aapko koi haq nahi banta ki aap pyaar ko... meri zindagi ko.. hurt kare matlab aapko koi haq nahi banta aap rey ko hurt kare... kyu kiya rey...
swayam come forward and place his hand on taani's shoulder and indicates rey that they knw the truth... rey was shocked... and gang were confused as they dont knw what's going on... taani leave's rey color... rey hold her arm...
rey: wo taani ye sab maine tumhare liye kiya...
taani: kyu rey kyu...kyu aapne meri nafrat sahi... aap mujhe itna pyaar kyu karte hai... ki mere future, kamyabi ke liye apne aap ko itna dard de rahe ho... (rey cupped her face)
rey: taani humare future ke liye... humari kamyabi ke liye... humare khushi ke liye
taani: nahi rey humari nahi meri kamyabi ke liye... aapko to koi khushi nahi mili bas dard mila... meri nafrat mili... pata hai mujhe rey mujhe wo sab us din bolkar aapko kitna dard hua hoga... jitne dard se mai guzri hu usse zyada aap guzre hai...
rey: lekin wo dard tumhare samne kuch nahi hai... mai jab bhi tumhe confident dekhta hu mera sab dard chala jata hai... kya tumhari khushi meri khushi nahi hai...
taani: ha meri khushi aapki khushi hai... par relationship mai bas khushi nahi dard bhi bata jata hai... par aapne to apna dard mujhe se nahi bata... batna to dur ki bat pata bhi lagne nahi diya... aapko kyua laga jab mujhe pata chalega ki ye sab aapne mere liye kiya hai to mai khush ho jaogi... no rey aap galat ho... mai kabhi khush nahi ho sakti kyuki wo khushi aapko dard mai rakhne ke bad mujhe milti... aapko dard dekar jo khushi mujhe mile wo khushi mere kissi kam ki nahi...
rey: aisa nahi hai taani... tumse judi har bat mujhe tumhare karib lati hai chahe wo dard hi kyu na ho... tumhe ye to pata hai ki tumhe apne aapse dur karke mai ji nahi pa raha tha... par ye bhi sach hai tumhe khush dekh kar kamyab dekh kar mujhe naye zindagi mil jati hai... aur ye nayi zindagi mujhe bohat khushi deti hai...
taani: nahi rey... maine aapko bohat dard diya hai...(she removed rey's hand)
rey: aisa nahi hai taani...
he went to hold her but she moves backward...
taani: aapke pyaar ke badle maine sirf dard diya hai aapko... mai aapka pyaar desrve nahi karti... mai aapko deserve nahi karti...
rey was shocked... he was unable to speak anything... taani went out from there... rey was too shock and hurt to stop her... he fell on his knees... gang was shocked seeing rey like this... swaron ran towards rey...
sharon: rey apne aapko sambhalo..
swayam: rey tu tension mat le... wo abhi guilty feel kar rahi hai isliye usne ye sab bola...
rey: maine ye sab use guilty feel karane ke liye nahi bola tha...
swayam: hume pata hai rey... wo tujhe chhod kar nahi ja sakti...
sharon: ha rey tumne uske liye itna sab kiya hai...
rey: ye sab maine isliye nahi kiya taki mai uske nazar mai itna ucha uth jao ki wo mujhse nazar bhi nahi mila paye... aur usse apni nazar mujhse hatani pade...
swayam: to ja rey usse bhi apni nazro mai itna utha de ki wo tujhse nazar mila sake...
rey looks at swayam... and swayam hold his shoulder... every one is confused as they didnt understand what swayam was trying to say... but sharon understood swayam... and she supported swayam...
sharon: ha rey swayam thik keh raha hai... jao aur taani ko believe karao ki she deserves u...
gang now understood... and do chemistry for swaron... rey also stand up... with confident on his face and determination that he will bring his taani...
rey: u are right... mai taani ko believe karaoga ki sirf wo hi mujhe desrve karti hai... only she deserves me... no one else...
aashi: to late types kyu kar rahe ho... jaldi jao...
nil: ya dude go fast...
rey was about to go but swayam stop him...
swayam: ye le ghar ki keys by chance taani ne door nahi khola to...
vicky: guys swayam... the possesive bhai... kaha gaya...
swayam: i trust them...
rey: thanx dude trust karne ke liye par mujhe keys ki zarurat nahi padegi... nahi taani ko door kholne ke...
all were confused... but swayam understood... and he screamed...
swayam: no rey...
rey: yes swayam...
swayam: tu window se nahi jayega... mai tujhe keys de raha hu na...(gang was smiling)
rey: par dude gf ke pas window se jaane ka maza hi alag hota hai... door se jane mai wo baat nahi hai...
sharon: swayam jaane dona usse... wo kahi se bhi jaye...
bharat: ab to sharon bol rahi hai... tu uski baat kaise taal sakta hai...
all laugh and swayam glared at bharat and sharon blushes...
rey: swayam sun...
swayam: ha bol...
rey: pls aaj ghar jaldi mat aana...
rey ran from there... all laugh... and swayam becomes uncomfortable... boys noticed this ...
vicky: swayam ab tera trust hai ya wo bhi rey ke saatha chala gaya...
swayam: aisa kuch nahi hai... bohat time bad unko akele time spend karne ka mauka mila hai...
amar: par swayam rey ne tujhe late aane ko kyu kaha... aisa kya karege...
swayam: guys i trust both of them...
all laugh at swayam...

at taani's room:
she was arranging rey's corner... she was caresing every pic of rey... and remebering all their sweet memories...
taani: kitna pyaar karte hai aap mujhe... par maine aap par bharosa hi nahi kiya...yaha tak aapki har chiz ko apne se dur kar diya itni aasani se...
rey came from window... he saw taani standing in front of her cupboard... firstly he was unable to to see rey's corner... he saw taani speaking to herself... so without making any noice he moved few steps forward... now he is able to see rey's corner... he was shocked...
taani: mai humesha se bolti thi ki mai aapko samajna chahti hu par shayad maine aapko kabhi samajne ki kosish hi nahi ki... agar ki hoti to aaj ye break up nahi hua hota...
rey: kisne kaha breakup ho gaya hai...
taani was shocked... she turned and saw rey standing in front of her...
taani: aap yaha...
rey: ha mai yaha... aur kisne kaha humara breakup ho gaya hai... kyuki agar humara break up ho gaya hai to tumhare cupboard mai ye pic kyu hai...
taani: wo...
rey: kyu tumhare pas koi ans nahi hai...
rey hold taani's arm... both has tears in their eyes...
rey: tumhe lagta hai ki tum mujhe nahi samajhti ho to tum galat ho... kyuki tumse zyada mujhe koi nahi samajta... mai khud bhi nahi...
taani; agar mai aapko samajti to aapka jhut pakad leti...
rey: tum mujhe samajti ho isliye tumhe pata hai is break up ke drama se mai kitna hurt hua hu... jo mujhe bhi nahi pata tha breakup se pehle... jis dard ka mujhe andaza bhi nahi tha wo dard tumne ji bhi liya sach sunkar...
taani:kaise nahi jiti us dard ke sath... wo dard to mera hi diya hua hai...
rey: par wo dard maine chuna tha... maine tumse break up ka drama isliye kiya ki mujhe pata tha truth samne aane ke bad tum mujhe samjhogi... kyuki mai janta hu tum bas meri ho... (he cupped her face) tumhare pyaar mai mujhe itna trust tha ki maine usse hi dau par laga diya...
taani: itna pyaar kyu karte hai...
rey: kyuki ki tumne mujhe isse bohat zyada pyaar diya... kyuki tumne humesha apni khushi se pehle meri khushi dekhi hai... mujhe ye sab karne ki himmat tumhe dekhkar mili hai... kyuki tumne apne aapko bhula ke mere liye jeena suru kar diya tha... aur mai aapni taani ko gum nam kaise hone deta... aur itna haq to banta hai ki mai apni taani ko gum nami se bacha saku...
taani: aapka mere upar pura haq hai mujhse bhi zyada...
rey: i know taani... isliye to itna bada decission tumse bina puche liya.. aur tumhare rey ko hurt kiya...
taani: aur maine aapki taani ko...
rey: i love u taani...
taani: i love u too rey...
they both hug each other... after a long time they were feeling each other's warmth...their body got plastered with each other... as they dont want to leave... after hugging each other for a long time they broke the hug... and on the floor in each other arm...
taani: promise me ki ab aap kabhi bhi mere rey ko hurt nahi karoge...
rey: ok promise... waise taani ek baat bolu...
taani: ha bolo...
rey: mujhe koi problem nahi hai if u want to be housewife...
taani: no rey... ab mai kuch karna chahti hu apne liye nahi aapke liye...
rey: par taani...
taani: rey i was wrong... jaruri nahi bas ek housewife hi aapne family ko achche se sambhal sakti hai... ek career oriented ladki bhi apne family ko achche se sambhal sakti hai aur apne sare rishte nibha sakti hai... ye sab aapne mujhe sikhaya hai...mai humesha apne career mai focus karne se darti thi kyuki mujhe lagta tha isse mai apno se dur chali jaogi... par aapne mujhe bataya mai kitni galat thi... mujhe ab pata chal gaya hai ki hume bas apne aap par bharosa hona chahiye aur hum sab kuch kar sakte hai...
rey: i am glad ki tumhe apne aap par trust aa gaya hai...
taani: ye sab aapke wajah se hua hai... thanks for loving me so much...
rey: i love you...
taani: i love you too...

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