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radhika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

amazing update loved it 😛

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asha rani.B.S

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Awe,Swayaym's sarcastic behaviour ws commendable.Ufff,Taani's flash back ws so hurting.I'm glad to c all gang favouring Taani.I hope Rey gt bck Taani sn.

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samiha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

awsome update nd it was an emotional 1... felt bad fr taani nd Rey also bt really glad tht this tym gang supports taani...luvd sharey bond... do update the nxt part soon

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swetha

@lovelytaarey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

emotional part

glad to know ki taani is not alone

rey: sharon mujhe ek baat ki khushi hai ki iss bar taani akele nahi hai uske sath uska bhai and friends hai...

loved dis dialouge.

continue asap

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Maya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

amzing update. Really hate ShaRey in this they think they know what's right but they were absoluetly wrong!! Love the gang and swayam supporting taani. do continue and PM Me!

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pritha roy

@piyaLovesJENSEN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

awww,,, it was sooo emotional ,,,,, swayum spoke his heart out ,,,,,,,, i was feeling bad for rey ,,,,,, all just coz of a mu ,,,, god i hope everything sorts out fast ,,,,,,,,,,,,, update soon

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Soumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Kya update tha it was anazing taanis past is so horrible n emotional n gang is supporting taani is nice n feeling sad for rey pm me when u update

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Ankita Bora

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Very nicely written that...har problem ka solution break up nahi hota!!

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Neha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Just caught up with both part, awww poor taani, my heart is breaking for her

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tamanna-azaan

@tamanna-azaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

thanx guys for ur comment and like... and here's the next part
PART 3
taani came to her room... she remember all the special moments of her life with rey in her room... she was controlling herself till now but after coming to that place where she got her prince charming... where her prince charming proposed her...where she lived most precious moment of life... she was unable to control herself... she fell down on her knees and started crying.. she was pulling her hairs and digged her face between her arms... in middle of her sobbling she screamed rey's name... and after some time when she dint have enough energy to scream and hold herself... she laid on floor...and slowly speaking to herself...
taani:kyu rey... aapne aisa kyu kiya... itna to mai tab bhi nahi tuti thi jab apne mujhe reject kar diya tha... kyuki mujhe laga jo chiz meri hai hi nahi usse khone ka kya gam... par aaj mujhe lag raha hai ki mai mar chuki hu bas saase chal rahi hai... kyuki aaj maine aapko pa ke kho diya... kyu humesha har chiz har rishte mujhe milkar mujhse dur chale jaate hai... meri kya galti thi... yahi ki jis pyaar ke liye mai humesha tarasti rahi wahi pyaar mai aapko dena chahti thi... kabhi bhi kisi wajah se aapse dur na jao... chahe wo apne future ko hi lekar ho... aapko lagta hai ki mai aapko samajti nahi par aap ye kyu nahi samajte ki aap mere sab kuch hai... aap hi meri zindagi hai... aap hi mera passion hai... aap hi mere khushi dard sab ho... aur jab se ye laga hai ki aap mujhe mil gaye tab se to mai aap ke liye hi ji rahi hu... koi bhi kuch bole koi fark nahi padta hai... kyuki mujhe pata tha aap humesha mere saath rahoge... phir kyu mera saath chod diya... kyu mujhe meri life ki khushi dekar mujhse mere jeene ka maksad chheen liya... kyu rey ... kyu...
she has so much of pain in her heart that now she felt week and dont have enough energy to speak to herself also... she slowly closed her eyes remembering all sweet memories of her and rey since she was unable to take more pain by remembering her break up with rey... she felt little bit of releif by remembering some sweet moment and tears fell from her eyes... she slept thinking that may be its her dream... worst dream of her life...
after some time swayam came home he directly went towards taani's room... he found her sister sleeping in the floor with swollen face tears in her eyes but still a sweet smile in her face...
he knws that the reason behind that sweet smile is not her break up or anything else but her and rey's sweet memory which she was seeing in her dreams... he also knew that after coming out from dream this sweet memory of her and rey will become the reason of her tears and her sister's sweet smile will disappear... so he dint want to wake her up... he was about to go when he thought something and turn towards taani...
swayam: mai humesha chahta hu ki tumahre face mai ye smile rahe... par ye bhi jaanta hu ki jhuti khushi se kadwa sach behtar hai... kyuki jab ye jhuti khushi ka sapna tutega tab aur taklif hogi... i am sorry taani but mai tummhe jhuti khushi nahi de sakta kyuki ye tumhe aur kamzor kar denge...
swayam went towards taani and sat beside her... he cares her hair and a small drop of tears from his eyes fell on taani's face... but that small drop was enough to wake her small sister... she slowly opened her eyes... she saw swayam in front of her and a smile appeared on her face but as soon as she noticed tears in his eyes her expression changed... she cupped her bhai's face and said...
taani: kya hua bhai...
then she suddenly remembers her break up with rey... she removed her hand from her bhai's face and closed her eyes... she was thinking that it was her dream but no this is her reality of life... which she cant change... she opened her eyes and saw her bhai with teary eye... she knew this bitter truth has become her part of life but she doesn't want that her pain affects her brother... so she wipped her bhai's tear... swayam knws that now she will pretend to be fine and the reason behind that as he knws her sister very well...
taani: bhai plz aap mat ro... mujhe aapke aakho mai tears bilkul pasand nahi...
swayam: taani tum thik ho...(he knws the rply but then also he asked)
taani: bhai mai bhi normal insan hu... break up ke bad kaise thik ho sakti hu(swayam is shocked by her rply)... thoda rona dhona to padta hai... pata to chale break up hua hai...
she told this thing to change the atmosphere... to change swayam's mood... she was trying to be fine... her life is rey but she is the life of many people her bhai, tauji,taiji... so she cant make them sad becoz of her....
swayam: taani... i am not joking...
taani: bhai abhi thik nahi hu par promise jaldi ho jaogi... aap meri help karoge na thik hone mai... is break up se bahar aane mai...
swayam: i am always with u...
and he hugged her tightly... tears are falling from their eyes... taani broke their hug and said...
taani: bhai ab chalo mujhe dinner banana hai... aur aaj mai aapka fav dish banaogi... PANEER...
swayam: itni mehnat karne ki kya jarurat... kuch simple sa bana do...
taani: bhai aap kitne week ho gaye ho... ab mai aapka achche se dhyan rakhugi...
swayam:ok...
taani went to kitchen to prepare dinner...and swayam went to his room to do his work.. after sometimes taani called swayam for dinner...
swayam: taani khana bohat achcha bana hai...
taani; i knw bhai... but thanks...
swayam: taani ek baat puchu...
taani: ji bhai...
swayam: kya tum sach mai papa ka office join karogi...
taani: ji bhai...
swayam: par taani...(cut by taani)
taani: bhai maa sahi bolti thi ki pyaar sab kuch nahi hota... aur maine kabhi unki baat nahi suni... par aaj pata chala ki sach mai pyaar hi sab kuch nahi hota... jab tak aap is society mai apni koi jagah nahi bana lete tab tak aapka pyaar bhi aapka saath nahi deta...
swayam: mai bas itna chahta hu ki tu ab aur hurt na ho...
taani: bhai ab isse jyada aur kuch mujhe hurt nahi kar sakta...
swayam: tumne to kuch khaya hi nahi...
taani: bhai mera ho gaya aur nahi...
taani went to her room...swayam sees pain in her eyes but ignored that becoz if he will discuss anything on this topic it will only hurt her... and he also wanted to give some time to her...

in rey's place, rey was silently crying remembering the harsh words which he said to her... he came out from his trance when he heared door bell... he opened the door and finds sharon standing their...
rey: tum...
sharon: andar aane nahi doge..
rey: come in...
they went towards hall...
rey: sharon tum yaha...
sharon: kyu mai nahi aa sakti...
rey: its not like that...
sharon: mujhe pata hai mere best friend ko meri jarurat hai...
sharon and rey sat on sofa...
sharon: rey ab jab hume pata chal gaya hai ki taani ka koi passion nahi hone ka reason kya hai... then why dont u patch up with her...
rey: sharon maine taani se breakup bas uske passion ko lekar nahi kiya... maine usse break up is liye kiya kyuki uski life mere upar puri tarha se dependent ho gaye thi... wo jo bhi karti sochti bas mujhe lekar sochti... wo apne liye nahi jiti... aur mai dar gaya tha agar kal mujhe kuch ho jata hai to wo mar jayegi...
sharon: rey par ab...
rey: i dont regret my decission... wo apne parents ko pehle hi kho chuki hai mai ye nahi chahta ki... aur agar wo mere jyada kareeb aakar kho degi to wo jee nahi payegi...
sharon: kya tum jee paoge...
rey: mai usko khush dekh kar jee lunga...
sharon: uski khushi tumse hai..
rey: shayad ab nahi... ab wo mujhse nafrat karti hai...

taani is sitting in her rum...
taani: mai aapse chah ke bhi nafrat nahi kar sakti... aapka diya hua har gam aapke diye huye pyaar ke samne kuch nahi hai... aur mai ye bhi janti hu ki ab aapko mere pyaar ki jarurat nahi hai... so i wont force my love...
she remembers her and rey moment...
(background music)
Teri khata hai mere jiya
Teri khata hai mere jiya
Unnpe bharosa kyun mene kiya
(she remembers proposal scene...)
Sab jhoothe jhoothe waade thhe unke
Chal peechhe peechhe aaya tu jinke
Woh piya aaye na
Woh Piya aaye na
Piya aaye na woh piya aaye na
(she remembers their first date...)
Ab sabhi unn khwaabon ki tu dagar chhod de
Ab sabhi unn khwaabon ko tu khud hi tod de
(she remembers when they discuss about their marriage in rh)
Woh piya aaye na
Woh Piya aaye na
Piya aaye na woh.. piya aaye na

Teri khata hai mere jiya
Teri khata hai mere jiya

Har khata ki hoti hai koi na koi sazaa
Gham likhe ho kismat mein to ban hi jaati wajah
Ab sabhi gham ashqon mein simat se gaye
Ab sabhi aansu palkon se lipat se gaye
Woh piya aaye na
Woh.. Piya aaye na
Piya aaye na woh... piya aaye na
(she remembers when rey went to goa without informing her then also she forgave him)
Sach laga tha jo bewajah
Humko woh bharam ho gaya hai
(she remember when rey says in beach" tum meri gf... sirf tum")
Bhor aane thhe jis fasaane mein
Woh khatam ho gaya
Bhoole hum bhoole woh
Kaise sabse kahein baat yeh
Ab chalo hum dheere dheere bihal se gaye
Ab chalo hum jaise bhi ho sambhal se gaye
Woh piya aaye na
Woh.. piya aaye na (woh piya aaye na)
Piya aaye na...
( she remembers their break up)
Teri khata hai mere jiya
Teri khata hai mere jiya
Unnpe bharosa kyun tune kiya

she keeps thinking about her and reys moment... and slept...

so here the end of part 3... hope u guys enjoy it... and now its ur turn hit like and comment as i luv to read ur comments... it took me more then 3 hrs to write this episode so pls give comments... and i knw i am unable to write emotional part nicely... but i tried... so pls comment...

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