[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#771

Originally posted by: NushIsh
This is probably a part from the club where he's holding her hand tightly. Can't wait to read more of silly drunk Virat.

And just noticed your banner. It looks awesome.

Thank u <3 lol over achieve not suppose to notice beforehand psh lol JK :)
Its after the club!!! Lol n im laughing at myself for writing wat I wrote!! Kinda lame n eeh made him psyco is that ok? Lolo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#772

hilrious yrr..n g00d 2..

w8ng 4 nxt part..! n

virat has g0ne mad due t0 drink...

update soon...!! n thnx a t0n 4 PM..!

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Tejeswy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#773

Originally posted by: Faria12345

A day after tomorrow? Crazyyy much? No give me tax thn will haha :p

Glad u started reading lol don't worry No more confusions from next chapter!

Are you okay..!! 😲

I mean u telling that there will be no more confusions is definitely super shocking..!! 😆 😛

Teaser was pretty awesome...!! Gawwd drunken Virat..!! 😆 😉

Nd abt the tax part..!! wt do u want.!? 😆

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: kushal90

Are you okay..!!😲
I mean u telling that there will be no more confusions is definitely super shocking..!!😆😛
Teaser was pretty awesome...!! Gawwd drunken Virat..!!😆😉
Nd abt the tax part..!! wt do u want.!?😆

Tax is that don't kill me if I end this story without giving any warning ;) but yah I will give u all the stuff that u desire lol

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keerthana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#775

kab milega update nd plz add virman romance

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Tejeswy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#776

Originally posted by: Faria12345

Tax is that don't kill me if I end this story without giving any warning ;) but yah I will give u all the stuff that u desire lol

Fine done i will not kill you 😛 😆

So wen r u updating.!?

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#777

Originally posted by: kushal90

Fine done i will not kill you😛😆
So wen r u updating.!?

Tomorrow or day after :)

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Aliyah

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Faria! Virat drunk .. toh Manvi ka kya hoga..? :O Can't wait till you update! Love your story <3

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

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vamps1996

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Posted: 12 years ago

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unres 😉

fariaaa *shouts out loud* ekkksss

are you planning to make me a crazyy woman reading thisss😆 this was eee i dont have any other word than crazyyy drunk virat and that to sooo much he wasnt in his senses and i loveddd that to bits...i never ever thought u would make me short of words for commenting but congoz *claps* u did kaminiii this was a one piece i know there are many writers who write exceptionally but this is something no one can u have a evil crazy physco imagination and no other dammm person can write viru boy behaving like like i swearrr

his pain his anger every damm thing was on its peak i cant even post thefav parts coz whole the update was filled with his crazinesss and i enjoyed it to bits i was laughing my ass off reading it dont be angry it wanst bad i was laughing coz his dialogues and cherry on the cake your suggessions and threats that u give in between cracked me up badly rofl and ths kiss part was shocking but oh well i know who the writer is so it doesnt evn shocks me now :-p buahahahaha and it was longgg thank u sooo much for writing this and i loveee the new banner i forgot to tell last time and yupp do u read or something like that your thoughts in the update are freaking like a scholar lol😉 im sooorryyy for not posting the fab parts bt if u ask me im honestly gona post the whole thing 😳😳😳 and yup the song was amazing though i hvnt lisned nr know which one it is bt still i loved the lines

lots of love ❤️

Edited by vamps1996 - 12 years ago