[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 80

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG OMG OMG !!! wat was tat Faria !!! Awesome !!! :D drunk virat gosh !!! this is crazy but superb !!!~~ the way he was driving n the police following them !!! the whole scenery was juz fabulous !!!
i feel like i was watching a movie !!!! i could juz imagine everything in front my eyes !!! tat was umm... actually i m speechless !!! i juz enjoyed reading it yaar !!! :) mazaa aagayaa !!! sacchi main :P
Raj reaction was hilarious !!! 😆 tat whole part was freaking awesome !!! ^_^ man this is soo good !!!n of coz the respiration part !!! ahem ahem !!! Mind blowing ;)
Finally viren entry !!! bhai hoe toh aisaa ❤️ the way he make understand manvi n all is juz soo nice !!!
that was a long update !! love u for tat🤗
Loved the update ❤️ again u stop at the wrong place Faria !! DO CONTINUE SOON !!! PLZ !!! will be waiting !!!
n the song !! i can't listen to it coz i have banned myself from listening to songs in Ramzaan !!! :(

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Huma0301

Honestly this was the best update so far
loveddd it so much
r u deliberately making virat luk like a good guy?
cuz i really loved the way he cared for her n saved her
sooo sweet
fab update continue soon 😉



Am I making him a good guy? 😉 What u think?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome..!! a lot good happned In here..!!! Loved it..Waiting for next n Thanks for the PM..!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it
continue soon
thanks for the pm
Niaksharma thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part dear
superb..
Liked it
fab update
too good
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb updt.. loved how virat saved manvi... but th last line is scary and virats drunk driving was so hilarious and exciting... haa haa haa... pls cont soon nd thnkd fr th pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
should i say ramadhan is having an effect on u???
i mean such a beautiful, emotional, non evil update from u??
pinch me somebody this is sooo unlike faria!!

owkaii faria i really really appreciate u for showing ur 'kind side'
i wish ''ur evil twin to take long nap'' - effect of excessive reading of BILU updates!!!
and yeah tell Anu di to update asap!!

my exams are starting this monday.. include me in ur duas plsss

love ya
take care
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: virmanhus

should i say ramadhan is having an effect on u???

i mean such a beautiful, emotional, non evil update from u??
pinch me somebody this is sooo unlike faria!!

owkaii faria i really really appreciate u for showing ur 'kind side'
i wish ''ur evil twin to take long nap'' - effect of excessive reading of BILU updates!!!
and yeah tell Anu di to update asap!!

my exams are starting this monday.. include me in ur duas plsss

love ya
take care



Welcome back baby! Afterso long seen ur comment <3 all the best for exams :) rock it n will pass ur MSG to ANU di! She said will update by Sunday so waiting for it ahha n believe it or not my evil mind is sleeping.. Soon gonna wake that up don't worry :p n thank u for the feedback
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Posted: 12 years ago
firstly i would like 2 say i loved d new banner...
its awesome...
now coming 2 d update...
wht should i say yaar...
ur updates always make me crazy wanting 4 more n more...
lyk our crazy virat...
d psyco virat ws quite cue huh...
i loved d update...
wel most of ur updates used 2 make me confuse...
bt nt dis one... i really loved it...
virats feelings 4 manvi ws so cleary visible...
i hope manvi's misunderstanding get clear soon...
thanx 4 d pm dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤔 so sorry I haven't read it as yet.

Will do today pakka

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