[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 79

and btw why do yu everytime end up sending me double pms 😛

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

and btw why do yu everytime end up sending me double pms😛

I'm sorry :( I think I reclicked it :( lol

Originally posted by: vamps1996

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<font color="#6600cc" size="4">unres😉</font>

<font color="#6600cc" size="4">fariaaa *shouts out loud* ekkksss</font>

<font color="#6600cc" size="4">are you planning to make me a crazyy woman reading thisss😆this was eee i dont have any other word than crazyyy drunk virat and that to sooo much he wasnt in his senses and i loveddd that to bits...i never ever thought u would make me short of words for commenting but congoz *claps* u did kaminiii this was a one piece i know there are many writers who write exceptionally but this is something no one can u have a evil crazy physco imagination and no other dammm person can write viru boy behaving like like i swearrr</font>

<font color="#6600cc" size="4">his pain his anger every damm thing was on its peak i cant even post thefav parts coz whole the update was filled with his crazinesss and i enjoyed it to bits i was laughing my ass off reading it dont be angry it wanst bad i was laughing coz his dialogues and cherry on the cake your suggessions and threats that u give in between cracked me up badly rofl and ths kiss part was shocking but oh well i know who the writer is so it doesnt evn shocks me now :-p buahahahaha and it was longgg thank u sooo much for writing this and i loveee the new banner i forgot to tell last time and yupp do u read or something like that your thoughts in the update are freaking like a scholar lol😉im sooorryyy for not posting the fab parts bt if u ask me im honestly gona post the whole thing😳😳😳and yup the song was amazing though i hvnt lisned nr know which one it is bt still i loved the lines</font>

<font color="#6600cc" size="4">lots of love❤️</font>

Thank you do much... I can breathe now cuz honestly speaking I was nervous to post it... I wrote this chapter out of the blue n was feeling bad at the end cuz I found it very lameee! But us alls comment made me think ok it's not that bad... Thank u or the complements b u didn't hear the song >___< shoot u in the brain GO LISTEN!!!!! N yes u guys have seen the cruel part of ur Virman haven't seen the actual part yet! So if u have patience then wait for it.. Will try my best to give u something that u want :p ahem ok enough of blunder see ya

Originally posted by: Faria12345

Thank you do much... I can breathe now cuz honestly speaking I was nervous to post it... I wrote this chapter out of the blue n was feeling bad at the end cuz I found it very lameee! But us alls comment made me think ok it's not that bad... Thank u or the complements b u didn't hear the song >___< shoot u in the brain GO LISTEN!!!!! N yes u guys have seen the cruel part of ur Virman haven't seen the actual part yet! So if u have patience then wait for it.. Will try my best to give u something that u want :p ahem ok enough of blunder see ya

its just amzing

faria finally virat falling for manvi

w0ah !!! it was such a l0ng update...!! it was hilarious too..!! virat was feeling jealous wen raj t0uched her..hmmm p0ssessiveness..gud gud..!!! i really like it..n virman's car kiss was s0 passi0nate..n n0w virat is feeling s0methng 4 manvi..its damn g00d..!! it was aws0me 1..!! n thnx 4 PM!! n update asap!!! n its gettng m0re intrstng..!! lvd it..!!

it was awesome update

Honestly this was the best update so far
loveddd it so much
r u deliberately making virat luk like a good guy?
cuz i really loved the way he cared for her n saved her
sooo sweet
fab update continue soon 😉