[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 77

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Posted: 12 years ago
TEASER

I cudnt give u other parts cuz it was slightly important but this one found it funny so here it is..

"blood" he said quietly Anger, frustration n helplessness was building inside his mind and the alcohol effects pour the petrol on the fire. "she is bleeding... RAJ SHE IS BLEEDING" he raised his voice while staring at her wrist
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"it's... Hur...hiccup...hurting... Make it stop please..." was crying now like a cute baby
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"bhagwan ji bacha Lo...He started to chant Hanuman challisa"

V- "why are u praying??" he asked him nicely

R- stared at him drumstruck! Meet Gajhni #2 Mr psyco Vadhera

V- "can I play music??" tilted his head n smiled like a mentally challenged person

R- saying the mantra n nodded in disagreement

V- "NO" he repeated his words with a fierce voice.. Looked back eyeing him with big eyes "how dare you say no to me..."

R- finished his mantra n nodded in YES cuz he wasn't going to take NO for granted.

V- "good boy... U r cute.." giggled thn played "Life in a fast lane" n started to move his head according to the beats, tapping the steer wheel creating rhythms


Confused? U sud be cuz that's Drunk VIRAT n he is acting silly :p
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Posted: 12 years ago
Interesting Precap..! waiting for the Update..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
confusion hi confusion hai solution kuch pata nahi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awee.. such a funny teaser...😆😆
virat is cho cute...
plz update d next chapter soon...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Drunk? Thank God you said that phew!! I thought you gave him a multiple personality disorder!! I've been wondering if he has that 😛 🤣 Jst joking!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shona_virman

Drunk? Thank God you said that phew!! I thought you gave him a multiple personality disorder!! I've been wondering if he has that 😛 🤣 Jst joking!!



Dont worry ur POV abt him will be exactly wat u said about after reading the update lololol hahaha
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Posted: 12 years ago
WAT A TEASER
DAT'S QUIET FUNNY
VIRAT'S TOTAL MANIAC...ANGY AT MANVI AT 1 MMNT N😆
FALLING FOR D SAME MANVI D 2ND MMNT😆
WRITE SOON...
CAN'T STOP LAUGHING AFTER READING D TEASER😆😆🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
both the buddies have gone crazzy...virat is sooo cute total madness..
update sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
fab teaser..love ur story
must say you confuse much
virat is total mad when he is drunk
continue soon.. Can't wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is probably a part from the club where he's holding her hand tightly. Can't wait to read more of silly drunk Virat.

And just noticed your banner. It looks awesome.


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