Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~THREAD 5

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segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

guilty of the same crime as arnav with the potato chips 😳

certainly sensing a thaw in his approach to her. candid shots without knowing why..hmm, sounds promising

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faffy

@faffy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

its such a heartwarming story - you have made emotions come alive, feel i am an integral part of the characters.
Great going!!!😊

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robinhood008

@robinhood008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

That was an amazinggg update!!

Loved reading it to bitss n it wont be wrong if I say I had a smile while reading the entire update
That smile got a little wide while reading arnav unintentional clicks of khushiz photogenic face without her permission

And also that smile changed into a grin while reading abt a very much annoyed n guilt ridden khushi scolding a sheepish arnav for being a firangi handing over chips...gosshh that dialogue cracked me up abt suing the company if his health was affected...have to say it again, where do u come up with these things to tell...i in love with your sense of humour n wits!!

Accha ohhoo I also forgot to tell you how that smile of mine changed into fits of laughter in that kitchen scene and khushiz sorry attempts of helping out arnav inturn makin him petrified by seeing her culinary skills

All I could ve imagine was kushi holding a chopper knife to dice tomatoes!!

So all said abt my smiles
I jus wanna add m relli loving these welcoming changes in arnavz heart for khushi and his appreciation over her concern for him

amazinggg update!!!

Edited by robinhood008 - 12 years ago

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Frida

@Frida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Nice update!

Arnav is warming upto Khushi now.. This alone time will give them an opportunity to understand & get used to each other.

Shyam's incident has hurt Khushi deep.. Glad that she is overcoming those insecurities gradually.

Eagerly waiting for the next update!!

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mem1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Aaawww... Everything my heart (and mind) desired, in one update. I loved it more than I can tell you.

Khushi was cute in the way she took care of Arnav, all the while expecting him to be taking care of her. and it was cute how she forgot about dinner, and how she thinks warming up milk and making Maggi is Cooking! But that is a good refection of a thoroughly pampered girl, brought up by some very caring people who took care of her every need.

She still wanted to help Arnav with dinner , and felt guilty for putting them in this position, which goes to show she may be pampered but still has her heart in the right place.

I am glad Arnav knows how to cook. and can cook food that Khushi actually likes...(what more do we need 😉)

The direction of your story is so natural. For someone with Arnav's background, the kind of stability and concern Khushi offers will mean way more than passion and beauty. the progression of his thoughts are handled in a very mature way. He is gradually finding that solace in her company that he had been searching for all his life. He even thought she was being like a mother to him, something his own mother never was.

I could go on and on... seriously I love this story...

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ForArhi

@ForArhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Oh how cute khushi is...and Arnav is falling ...slowly but steadily. He is opening up..can't wait to read more..

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Drkk

@Drkk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Beautifuly written. Atlast arshi is civil 2 eachothr. Mention of shyam, potato chips, bisleri, cooking skills. Wondrful. Arnav is gettng attractd 2 khushi. Waitng 4 nxt update

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please6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

love it sweet and thanks god arnav started to soften up a bit

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rvas

@rvas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

loved it...arnav cooking pasta how cute and love the way you are giving the characters especially arnav time to get to know each other

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nisha_mehta

@nisha_mehta

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Update was toooi good.
Arnav cannot stop thinking about khushi. While she has realised that he is a different once u get to know him.
Poor khushi does not know how to cook while arnav knows his way around in the kitchen
Continue soon

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