Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~THREAD 5

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barbiebala

@barbiebala

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

awesome update
the fair events are too good
he overwhelmed with khushi's care
it made arnav to need someone with him ever
and also he loved her company very much
arnav is changing completely

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sreeanshu

@sreeanshu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

I love the way you potrayed khushi in this. very nice story.

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thulasi_arshi

@thulasi_arshi

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

lovely update..

more arshi conversation in this update❤️❤️

advance thks for pm

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Aditi

@uv-crazyfan

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

a very cute update dear. First arnav kept clicking photos of the fair which later shifted to clicking khushi's pics...he is drawn to her. And khushi not eating until she got chips for arnav was too cute bt the higglight of the update is their kitchen convo which was way beyond funny and sweet. Continue soon :-)

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--BumbleBee--

@--BumbleBee--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

res!!

Will edit comment after exams

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-Shalu-

@-Shalu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Yay, you updated!

I felt terrible for Khushi when she thought of how Shyam wanted to disassociate himself from her in public due to her limp.

Ah, so Arnav has started to slowly fall for her, I think? I love how he is looking out for her and taking care of her.. The Kitchen episode was so cutely funny! 😆

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NISHI

@nishi22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Amazing chap..arnav click MANY pic of her...hehe..arnav ua going to fall for her very soon

Edited by nishi22 - 12 years ago

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

He's so Drawn to her...like she has this magnetism pulling him towards her...

I loved it...it's such a soothing story...heartwarming...I waiting for him to fall in love with her...

Awesome update...

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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

hi there wonderful update once again...

when you started second season i was a bit apprehensive about it generating as much interest as in the first part.. don't get me wrong... sequels pretty much become shadows of the first one i didn't doubt your story or your writing skills but the title somehow made me reminiscent of your first part ...i always used to think will this sustain the charm of the first part? i relied on your story writing skills and trusted it as you said in the beginning now i am really content the way this is going you have successfully created a franchise of mkm...😊my sincere congrats to you and your story...

coming to the update subtle is your strength how you write emotions inner thoughts scenes between characters is absolutely laudable... waiting eagerly for the next part...