Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~THREAD 5

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Posted: 12 years ago

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

If you wish to read more of this story, please refer to this NOTE (it's on Thread 30 in case the link does not work).

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incandescent

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Posted: 12 years ago

res...me first 😲

UNRES.

That was a lovely update. I had a huge grin plastered on my face while reading it.

Arnav ended up taking more pictures of her then the fair...awww. He has no idea why he did it and he has come with the explanation that she's photogenic. 😆

Shyam felt ashamed to be spotted with her. 😡

'Potato chips. Packaged and sealed by a huge multinational company which guarantees that it is safe to eat it. And if something STILL happens to you, I'll make sure that bade papa sues them and gets you an apology and adequate compensation'🤣

Only KHushi can come up with such explanations. 😆

Khushi forgot about dinner while talking to bade papa. 🤣

The cooking part was too cute.

Arnav is slowly but steadily opening up his heart. 😳

They are beginning to rely on each other and care for each other.

Beautifully written.

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pixiegirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

Res... Me second!! 😃

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Awww, what a delightful chapter you have written dear, LOVED it to the CORE!!!

I have been waiting since the prologue to see Arnav capture Khushi on film & today you fulfilled that desire... So one quiet, reticent Arnav a.k.a. "Sadu" Singh Raizada discovered that Khushi a.k.a Ms. Sunshine is very VERY photogenic & hence needed to be captured more on film than the actual mela he wanted to photograph... Ahem... 😉 Chalo koi nahin, maan liya bahut photogenic hai isiliye mele ke bahut kum photoo liye unhone. 😉

Bitwa was floored by her concern about him not being able to eat or rather acting all phirangi & refusing to eat anything at the mela, so madam went & bought potato chips manufactured by a multi-national company for him to eat without any health repercussions or else her bade papa would go sue them & seek adequate compensation on his behalf... On top of that, SHE refused to eat until she had got him some grub to eat... Adorable. 😳 And bitwa knows it & appreciates it very, very much!! ❤️ Nice!! 😃 (Melting of the Polar ice cap 😉)

But it was really sad to see that Khushi is still hurting inside after being jilted by Shyam b/c of her limp... Her trying to avoid being seen with Arnav b/c she did not want to embarrass him was quite heartbreaking really... I also loved how Khushi was accurately reading his quiet demeanor... Proving her perceptive nature...

Khushi managing the house & forgetting to tell Arnav to eat outside because she was busy chatting with bade papa was cute but her making those puppy eyes at Arnav was super cute... 😳

But what had me laughing like an idiot was this line... "I'll make something. What do you wanna eat? Bread-butter or Maggi?' OMG!!! I still have tears in my eyes.

Arnav's reply was even funnier ... "'Neither. We should eat something normal people eat in dinner' he narrowed his eyes at her preposterous dinner options." 🤣

Thanks for making Khushi a real girl with her inexperience at running a household & zero, zilch culinary skills. 😃 It was so endearing to read her banter with Arnav in the kitchen, it was howlarious... "I forgot that there would be no dinner waiting for us at home because generally it is there." 😆

I love the way Arnav is slowly realizing her true worth... I just loved the way he thought of her as someone reliable was so touching... "because she was a constant like sun. Somebody you can rely on, someone who will bestow you with their warmth no matter what happens."

Another fabulous chapter, loved the way Arnav is slowly thawing & warming up to the sunshine that Khushi is. May his heart soon be filled with warmth & mirth that has been so sadly lacking from his cold, lonely existence...

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Posted: 12 years ago

It's nice...

The fair part and then in kitchen...Arnav is the more mature one here,.. The story is from his point,..

I like the part he has started clicking her..

The thaw has become warmth... And he acknowledges she's a photogenic girl...

Khushi also realizes he is not embarrassed of her limp.

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Memu1

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Posted: 12 years ago

Such a beautifull chapter ..very well expressed. Both of them are trusting eachother to take care.Now Arnav had started to look at the other side of the coin..

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molten-aqua

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Posted: 12 years ago

wonderful update 😊

arnav is so sweet!!! his musings on the effect khushi has on his heart were beautifully wriiten!!

arnav cooking dinner for khushi was so sweet 😊 atlast, he is warming up to her!!

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priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

loved it
arnav's feeling changing slowly,khushi is the sunshine for him

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

Res

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Congrats on the new thread!! So well deserved.

LOVED LOVED LOVED the update.

I am just loving the way Arnav approaches each issue. Him taking her to mela, clicking her snaps, watching out for her in the crowd and my all time favorite, cooking for her.

This is getting so interesting, just can not wait for the next one!

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Atyay

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Really... honestly... absolutely... LOVED IT!!!! 👏 👏 👏

Wonderful update!

So, Arnav actually took her snaps more than the fair's. Liked their conversation while Arnav was cooking & later Arnav's musing about how Khushi is gaining importance in his life, gradually.

Will be anticipating your next update. 😊

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