Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~THREAD 5

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stories.1408

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

arnav is gone lattoo over laddoo!!

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avchowdhury

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

very interesting and beautiful update

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harsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

I loved the chapter. They are developing an understanding attitude towards each other which is so much fun to read. I liked the light tone of the chapter. Arnav is such a paranoid.

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Loved it, what a great chapter, a feel good one!

The day was perfect, everything that I hoped would,happen at the mela did...a new side of both was revealed ...of Khushi's to arnav and of Arnav to Khushi. The basic groundwork was established, something unexplained even to him made him takes so many candid photographs of her,and each picture spoke to him, silently.

She, sensitive to his needs and finds something for him to eat and cared enough to get him to,eat...even if by using emotional black mail, she realised her limp did not bother him.

Loved the description of the mela and despite the conditions, Arnav had a good time, loved the art about his NY lungs needing oxygen !

Like the subtly and unforced shift in their relationship, he sees her for the self and realises her qualities that make her special...

Loved how she takes the phone from him interrupting his conversation only to have one about the day...and he did not mind...

Loved how he reacted on seeing her with the knife . Loved that ASR is cooking. Loved how all she knows is microwave cooking...

Really enjoyed this chapter!

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A_BA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Loved the update! Arnav taking pictures of Khushi was really telling of what he's feels towards her but he can't put into words yet. The kitchen scene was also very good...it's a good thing that Arnav knows how to cook!

The way you described his emotions towards Khushi was really nicely done...can't wait for more!

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anonyasr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Great chapter. Arnav does not know that he is irrevocably falling in love with Khushi. Beautifully written.

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shalini_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

omg.. Khushi & her dialogues.. funny.. loved their day.. nicely written.. so Mr.ASR is falling and falling hard...

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mrin0709

@mrin0709

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Awesome.. You write so beautifully...,

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_disha_

@_disha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

What a lovely update !

Especially for the fact that most of it was from Arnav's POV ...and did he have a hand full or what!😆

Its difficult to sum up who is looking after whom ...but the bottom line is they both have become a formidable team unknowingly!

She praises him for being responsible and he looks upto her for being the ray of sunshine in their dark household !❤️

Things are going rather smoothly ...i am very curious to see where this is heading to now !

The potato chips scene along with Khushi and her cooking skills wala scene were too good !🤣

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

You know, I looked for this story everywhere, and when I did, I caught up with the last three updates! Gosh Khushi is really an overprotected child...but it's ironic to see how mature she is in one moment and so utterly childish in the next. Atleast Arnav's character hasn't changed much...being so akdoo...but I can see that he has started to soften up somewhat towards Khushi.

Amazing update!