Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~THREAD 5 - Page 6

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tanu3579 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
yes yes yes :) :) finally the clicking of pics started :) :)

i dont knw y bt i like the very idea too romantic :)
oh n he is trying to hide the fact tht he tuk her pics :) ... think arnav think.. y wud a person like u do tht.. i mean u wudnt care wht she thinks.. or anyone thinks.. u usually keep thgs straight by being absolutely open abt them... no stealth ...
so y nw.. think dear.. shud give u an insight into ur heart ;)

khushi tking care of arnav, n refusing to eat till she find him sthg edible as per him :) was sooo khushi :) always caring n considerate :)

the cooking session was too gd :) arnav starting a conversation... was as shocking to khushi as to us... n i m sure fr both it was pleasent shock :)

n here again.. khushi is soo cute :) doesnt hold grudges :) hangs on to anythg positive she finds.. even if its just a tiny bit...

i cant help bt quote this: "His dad was right, she was just like sunshine in this huge house with dark past of its occupants. And he now knew why. Not because she was like the rays of sun brightening up people's life, which of course was true but because she was a constant like sun"

this was too gd :) the above i mean.. i like the way her being sunshine is defined as not only her smiling bt the fact tht she will always do tht irrespective of wht life throws as her.. tht is wht mks her a strong person, lovable darling tht she is :)

i m soo luking fwd to further story n chapters :) i wish i hd a time machine to mk it happen sooner...

waiting..
Edited by tanu3579 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Arnav enjoyed fair or enjoyed clicking only her pics😆

That was a hilarious comment when arnav didn't wanted to eat something!

He is concerned for her now a days! Which is actually good for their relationship😉
Overalll an awesome update😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Very nice... kitchen cooking part is awesome :-)
Edited by priya_sv - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
awesome update loved it please update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Nice chapter A! I was amazed when i knew that she did not know cooking...well it was a different track n arnav cooking for her was amazing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Lovely update..
Beautifully written...
Cooking part wad cute... 😛
Both are taking care of each other... 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
:-D did u just update di ?? Yeah yeah yeah !! Thank you so much for updating. :-D a beautiful update. . Beautifully written. From the start till the end. Arnav khushi at the mela !! Arnav clicking khushi's pics and then hehehe himself confused as to y he clicked. . And then consoling himself. :-P khushi's concern for arnav. . Hehehe i loved the way she said that she will tell arnav's dad to sue them and get compensation. {COMPENSATION - question had come for exam. :-D diff types normal ,exemplary , justified etc etc etc } and then 'bisleri is not food'. . I would 've been there i would be like toot pado on chat. Doesnt arnav know eating such food increases the resistant power ? :-P though he calls it unhygenic. . Its very tasty !! So khushi's mission accomplished of getting something to eat for arnav. . :-D and arnav's sweet lie of showing her pics at home. . ;-) so arnav is loving khushi's bak bak now. . I also talk so much. :-P my mom calls me non stop express !! I love this slow changes in arnav. . Very soon unknow to him he will be madly in love with her !! :-D and also when khushi had said that he is suppose to take care of her and not the either way round. And khushi helping arnav in kitchen. Lol !! She is a disaster like me in kitchen. :-D !! I'll set our kitchen to fire one day. ;-) arnav cooking. . How sweet. . Even i wanna taste . . And wow gr8 progress raizada. . Started a convo ?? I can imagine khushi's imagination. . She will be like 'hawww' hehehe :-D good good. . Good improvement. And off course arnav cant be like shyam who feels ashamed to walk with someone like khushi . . Arnav is a darling. :-D di can i also get him plz ?? Only 12 years difference !! Please ?? I know you wont be giving him to me. He is only for your khushi.. !! So its okay. . I'll console my poor heart. And so now the whole scene is perfect. I loved the way khushi went on and on. A perfect awesome update. . Too good. !! Now it keeps me waiting for next one. I'll sacrifice arnav only if u promise to update early ! Pretty plz ?? Cannot wait for next. . Update soon. . Waiting desperately. . Please di. . Thank you for the pm in advance. :-D and thank you for taking time to write. Loved it. Muuhax. . Take care. . Keep writing. . Stay blessed. . Keep smiling. With love vrushika !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Congrats on the new thread! My most favorite part of the update was the end.

the way his attention always gets diverted to that bewitching smile of hers, he had an uneasy feeling that it would be his undoing some day!

True , isn't it? He made another excuse to himself about being captivated by Khushi and clicking her pictures, she's photogenic?😆 Like seriously! That's the best he could come up with!😆


Few things that made me laugh - Khushi is hilarious!🤣

1. 'For the hundredth time, Bisleri is NOT food Arnavji' Khushi replied exasperated.

2. 'I know microwave cooking' she defended her dignity.

3. Potato chips. Packaged and sealed by a huge multinational company which guarantees that it is safe to eat it. And if something STILL happens to you, I'll make sure that bade papa sues them and gets you an apology and adequate compensation' she said in one breath, looking at him pointedly.


Wonderful update! Continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Wonderful Update...
Arnav clicked Khushi's pic n cooked for them... Lovely
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
u r beyond amazing!!! just one day and der was all the instances that showed hw she feels that hes not ashamed of her unlike other ppl...him confirming that kushi can be the most reliable support to any1...him unknowingly admiring her beauty in and out...his concern for her ... its cute to c him taking care of her like a baby thaat she is...but one fine day at some other emotional level she will be he one to take the role of his mother and care for him with the passion that only a mother or true soul mate can...cant wait cant wait!!!!!!
read MKM 1 again and just hope this arnav also get possessive and jealous ;) just a wish...but i am sure whatever u got in mind will be better than i can hope :)

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