Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~THREAD 5

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BSRaizada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

That was really lovely. Arnie is thawing toward khushi n ltl bitthinkig of her, too. Now for shut she knows she's real sunshine ! Hope to c their growing friendship n concern soon!

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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

I simply LOVED this chapter.

When I first started reading it, I was wondering what was going on, only to then find out that Arnav was scrolling through pictures of Khushi that he had taken..it seems as if Khushi's beauty is beginning to caste its spell and he can't keep his camera off her! Poor him, he couldn't eat anything at the carnival and his mother never cared about his health or happiness. Though Khushi does and that's wonderful, she even found the only food he could have had at the carnival.She's hilarious and the part where Arnav just knows that she doesn't know how to cook had me in splits.It was a nice change to know that at least he knew how to cook,and specially enjoyed reading about his concern.You've done an amazing job portraying the drastic change in their relationship,specially the part where he starts to enjoy her mindless chatter.Shows how he is getting used it. Their friendship is thoroughly entertaining. Continue soon, I simply cannot wait for the next chapterrr.😊

Congratulations on your 5th thread!!!

Edited by InkyCupid - 12 years ago

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hot.cakes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Fascinating, the way you described all of it.

I wish Khushi had looked at the pictures of herself he had sneakily taken, though 😆😛

Horrible experience of Khushi's cooking! 😃

And Arnav saves the day! 👏😆

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Nehasupnfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Has haske lot pot ho gayi main!! That was just brilliant!! I was so excited to read about the fair and you didnot disappoint! He took more pictures of her than of the fair..I wonder if Khushi will find that stash oh photos later on. And I love how Arnav is happy with Khushi's concern. Whether he needs his father's love or not...he definitely needs Khushi's care, concern and love! And Khushi's cooking skills has me dying with laughter!! Can we please have Arnav teach Khushi cooking?? PLEASE?? I'm so glad Arnav is mellowing down towards Khushi!! :) :) Thank you for the PM :) Please update soon!!!

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soaringskies

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Awww i am loving the comfort level they have developed...😊

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meem17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Thanks for the update
Love it...arnav is aware of her..
Khushi mera baby when will u get the hint

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Arshix144

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Smiling from ear to ear, yes that's what you did to me with this chapter! You are awesome!

Arnav is capturing Khushi in his camera little does he know that this lady has already captured his heart. Khushi's concern for arnav's eating was heart warming not only for Arnav but for me too :D She wouldn't eat until she found him a safe and sealed packet of potato chips!😳

The kitchen episode was just too cute, Khushi's innocent chatter and her getting defensive about her lack of cooking skills was too damn cute. Again another experience that I could so relate too :P You bring up so much reality to your writing that makes me wonder whether you draw some of it from personal experience or from people around you. It is just brilliant!

Can't believe Shyam was embarrassed to be seen with her and the fact that she tried to walk away from Arnav so he doesn't feel uneasy was heart breaking! 😭 Wonder how would arnav react when he finds about what Khushi tried to do and how Shyam was with her.

Totally loved this chapter and what I loved the most that has stayed with me too is when Arnav referred to Khushi's smile: "he had an uneasy feeling that it would be his undoing some day!" 👏

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SanzBarbie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

I just love ur unique style of writing !
Loved ur penchant and skill in detailed writing so as all the happenings are conjuring up infront of readers eyes while reading it !

Really loving the flow of the story how Arnav's heart is warming towards the bundle of sunshine that is Khushi !! Khushi's character sketch is extremely adorable , she is like a cutie, pampered baby in one moment and a very understanding and dependable in other one !!
I just wish u could make the wonderful updates coming more frequently :)
This story along with Expel and Semanti's collaboration works I await everyday with bated breath !!

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pree2605

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

superbbb...
khushi explanation abt th t potato packet made me laugh lyk mad...arnav and khushj hve strted spendin time.with each oder..understnd each oder...
thnxx fr pm..
waiting fr ur next update