Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~THREAD 5

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Ashavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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loved it that Arnav started realising her true worth and has started relying on her...loved the fact that Khushi does hold on 2 people no matter what and fill them vt her warmth...i guess Arnav has already started falling for Khushi as he can't stop thinking abt her warmth and lovely smile...
felt sad that Khushi is still affected by fact that she limps and tried 2 move away frm Arnav so that he is nt embarassed...
loved the progress in Arnav...
khusi has opened up 2 Arnav and shares everything vt him...eager 2 see a day when Arnav vl openup 2 her and share his loneliness,insecurity and al...

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mehak

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I really loved d chaptr..i found it very cute that arnav took more of khushi's pics n giving an explanation that she is fotogenic...
d cooking part was cute..

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sulu_123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Nice chapter. The desription of khushi at the fair , enjoying herself , yet concerned for Arnav because of his fastidiouness about what he eats, managing to find something that wud be acceptable to him., That was super cute. And the way she monopolised the phone conversation with bade papa, that was cute too.

And arnav is lowly realsing how unique khuhsi is and how wrong he was about her. Its almost as if her spell is growing oon him. His realisation and acceptance that khushi is indeed the sinshine that his dad spoke of , the constant who was alwways there is really a huge step forward in their relation. So it seems arnav is slowly becoming more and more aware of her. Like she is never very far away from his thoughts. And he is possibly feeling the beginning of totally different feelings for khushi.

Like he becomes aware of how he gets drawn to her smile.

the way his attention always gets diverted to that bewitching smile of hers, he had an uneasy feeling that it would be his undoing some day!

I think its arnav who is going to fall irrevocably in love with khushi, against his wish, underming his defences. Khushi is too much of a kid to be attracted to him and she is only so far thinking of him as a dear friend who's being nice to her and taking care of her. When those feelings will change, she will be really confused. She is already very conscious of her disability.

So, waiting for nxt update. God bless.

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orchids8888

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Hey dear thanks a lot for the pm.

What a beautifully written update👏 I am definitely thinking of re-reading it. It has left a very positive and mind blowing impact on me.😛 I just dont have words to express it.⭐️

The way you have described the entire day of Arnav and Khushi at fair was very normal and friendly. Arshi was so comfortable with each other, caring towards each other, patiently listening to each other and helping each other to overcome their short comings. No one can guess that it was their first outing together with each other where they were alone without Bade papa and bua.

Please continue soon. As always eagerly waiting for your updates.😊

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nightfury

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

nice update bisleri is not food rofl 🤣 good one

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aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

I so loved this update...

It was amazing An😊

Arnav couldn't stop himself from capturing Khushi more than the fair. He can't be blamed though she is so sweet and lively. Arnav lied and now won't tell her how much he clicked her.😛

I really loved the scene where Khushi searched something for him to eat before going on with her bhelpuri. The amount of care she takes of everyone is touching. She is truly a sunshine.😊

She talks so much and now he has become quite habitual of it also liking her chattering. And she knows how much he has taken care of her amidst the crowds and everywhere they have visited in the fair. The feeling of Khushi that he may get awkward being seen with her in public is natural as she has felt it with shyam. Such thoughts never leave so easy but Arnav constantly bridging the distance made it quite clear that he doesn't give a damn and I doubt if he even saw the girls giving him those anxious glares. His whole attention was on Khushi only.

If Khushi stole my heart by taking care of his food in the fair Arnav touched it when he himself started the conversation after scolding her as he was unable to bear her all quiet that's so unlike her. His scold was another form of concern. Men in love usually scold their women if they find them doing any thing that could end up hurting her.😊

Khushi is beginning to make a place in his heart. He may not realize it now but he is going to feel it soon that his world has changed & Khushi has become an inseparable part of it.

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l.savitree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Potato chips. Packaged and sealed by a huge multinational company which guarantees that it is safe to eat it. And if something STILL happens to you, I'll make sure that bade papa sues them and gets you an apology and adequate compensation' 🤣...hahaaa khushi👍🏼

love the cooking part👍🏼

nice update & thank for the pm

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praseetha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

congratz 4 the new thread.
Awesome update.

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dsbj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

awesome update.. Beautifully written.. Conversation was so cute & funny ..its nice to c that they r spending some more time together.. Luved it .. And waiting for next upadate eagerly.
xoxo

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