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@SuperstarSanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#511

Nidhi..

just to tell you..

I am on board.. 😃

and I am loving it.. it's so wonderful so far.

creates such an tingling feeling..😳

mystery around Arnav.. it's fascinating.

and then.. Ocean.. beach.. NC.. charlotte.. Lovely Lovely places.👏

will back with full comment after I finish all 4 parts.. 😊

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amita

@star_fan1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#512

awesome update

loved it too much

Arnav is having a little bit of communication with Khushi

waiting for next update

plz continue it soon

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_disha_

@_disha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#513

Omg N ... well after our CC ermm what do we call that session today i realised i had not even read the latest update of THT ... so here i am little late but still... Atleast before the new one comes !!!

RES !!!

Will edit in a while !!!

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First Arnav from Finding Love and now Arnav from The Healing Touch ...seriously Nidhi they both are so very different but irresistibly attractive and with the way this story is slowly unfolding at its pace i have this weird coiled up feeling like just wanting to know more and more about him.

You know what surprises me the most is that though Khushi is apparently the young one yet she is much more aware of her surroundings and is able to maintain the mask of indifference when Arnav is around and its Arnav who is running for cover not being able to fight this pull between them. Where as Khushi is all ready to embrace this.

She is constantly aware of her feelings and his presence and looks forward to the same and Arnav... what do i say he is there in the B&B itself as a means of escapism and he is still dealing with his discomfort in the same way!

Now he knows she is an artist..that must have impressed him !

With every update we know more of Khushi ...u seem to be deliberately hiding Arnav and that only increases my curiosity!

Great Job N ... loving it !!

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saavan_lover

@saavan_lover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#514

That was an awesome update! Love how Arnav is softening up to Khushi and that kiss on her burn was just magical <3 Cant wait to read more :)

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@SuperstarSanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#515

Chapter 1:

aaahh.. start of a story.. with the description of Beach, beach house... summer and ocean..

can I ask anything more soothing and calming? 😊

it drowned me into from very first para itself.. mainly becoz, the way you have described Inn, Garima Gupta and her 2 nieces, Charlotte, NC..

Beautiful is the Word!

that playful kitchen banter of Gupta sisters.. and

Like always Khushi running into that strainger's arms.. 😳

It couldn't have been any more perfect for the first chapter of the story.. to make me glue to it.

"Hi, I'm checking in, the name's Arnav Singh Raizada"

I am dead.. just by visualizing Arnav saying this. ☺️

Chapter 2:

can we call her Khushi Gupta if she doesn't blabber and stumble, get nervous around certain someone and murmur to herself and make mistakes..

their 2nd encounter and Khushi already had had her impressions wrong.😆

that mystery around Arnav, that aloofness, definitely fascinates me so much about this Man. He is intriguing!

and then the song that flew out..

I am seriously drawning into this story. I thought FL was the best piece written by you and now you are having me change my mind to that!

😃

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@SuperstarSanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#516

and with each chapter..

Arnav is getting more and more Sexy!

the way you have described him in this story..

I am dazed!

So, he did remember their first encounter at Art gallery. her presence affects him. Interesting!

and he inspires Khushi to paint. 😳

and, he knows she was watching him.. came up to help her. oh Man, that lift.. and the way proximity affects both their senses.😳

she feels the connection.. She isn't aware about the feelings... but Not outright denying them eithe!. aww, I love the direction this story is taking.

She wants to break the ice! 👏

This is one of the amazing lines, I have read on Arnav-Khushi.

"Without looking at her Arnav picked up her hand and brought it to his lips, kissing the ugly mark forming on her perfect skin. It was the softest brush of lips against skin, not even a full kiss, but it caused Khushi's breath to hitch in her throat, perspiration to form on her forehead, and her heart to race as if she had just run a marathon, it was enough to cause all these changes amongst her being, it was enough to make her realize that she had been right, there was some sort of a pull between them."

And, their coffee encounter,

She waits for him.. hoping to catch some alone time..

he is coming towards her like iron to magnet, doesn't want but couldn't stop himself!

so, he only wanders around/talk to her when she is alone. Again Interesting!

This Arnav is affecting me too much... making me so very much want him. That mystery around him, is like pulling force.

Nidhi, what brilliant range of emotions you have covered in this story, I am loving it.😃

Need an update soon.. please.😳

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

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Posted: 12 years ago

#517

Such a lovely chapter this was :-) I love how Kitchen is one place where Arnav relaxes, and just sits and chills. And I love how Khushi waits and lingers there just to sit there and talk with him. And im so happy they had a normal conversation (about the contract).

Reading THT relaxes... Feels good 😃

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#518

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#519

Nidhi...

This is one of those,stories that I am scared to comment on as I can never do justice to its brilliance and never have the correct words to let you know just how much I have loved it ...this story, the characters, this Arnav I just cannot get off my mind...

I loved how Khushi, looks longingly at the couple in love, sharing intimate moments which normally would embarrass her, but now looking at them she feels the desire to have a relationship like that for herself life...she is greedy to share her life with they someone special ...and not just with anyone...these feelings have been evoked by Arnav's presence in her life...and her thoughts going back to the comfort they have developed by just their presence, where silence has played such a crucial role in their bonding...that routine they have formed...without words...just being together, both doing their own things has been enough...working side by side in perfect harmony...

The visual you achieved by your writing is truly outstanding ...and the ambience...I can hear the waves and the feel the breeze...I can feel the silence ...yet I can hear something ...unspoken...

Loved how with him around she has no inhibitions about her sketching something that so far she has needed solitude for...loved how she does not want to show him his sketch...I am guessing the foremost reason being she does not want him to know she is sketching him...

Loved how,catching up with Jenny she cannot help ask Jenny about love and how one realises the feeling for someone connecting everything to the overwhelming feeling she has for Arnav...even knowing how different toeach other they are yet there is something that draws them to each other... ..that conversation so realistic and so heartfelt...

I love how having admitted her feelings about Arnav and her attraction towards him is making her feel vulnerable ...like now they are indeed real feelings now that she has acknowledged them !

I love how when he comes to ask for extra rooms she is disappointed expecting perhaps something more ... And he senses that in her eyes immediately...asks her...love how inspite of everything, she feels an emotional disconnect with him in terms of him opening up...

Loved his introspection, he is trying to stay away from her especially after what he sees the vulnerability in her eyes and he realises that he can never give her want she deserves , she needs the love trust and commitment the happily ever after, and he needed to stay away from her as he was not going to be able to give her all she deserved...and he had to stop this before things went any further ... Making up his mind to finish his work and go back and never see her avian...

But easier said than done, he cannot stay away either...room her and just the thought of not seeing her made him restless and gave him a feeling he did not know...and by instinct he was down at the beach unable to stop himself from approaching her...love how they walk together and he tells her a bit about his life and his mother and her death...something that is obviously painful to share but telling her was so easy and felt right...

Loved the last part...he knows it was so easy for him to talk to her, attracted he always has been to her and that was to him a dangerous combination...loved how somewhere they both feel the same ...what happens when he realises what all that one kiss will will lead to?

Waiting for the mystery guest...

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Afya

@Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#520

Will read first thing tomorrow. It's very late where I live and so, feeling sleepy.

Edited: As promised here i am checking your update lying in bed with my iPad.😛

You have got me hooked to your stories.😊. They are such a pleasure to read.

What a beautiful story, NIdhi. And again fabulous writing...so well thought of...each word carefully placed. 👏.

Khushi' s longing for that eternal relationship...with Arnav, her confusion about the same...so, beautifully conveyed. She realises she wants more from him... More than just 3 hrs of silent company...She begins to long for him...and he sees that..and decides to take a few steps backwards.

But not for long...he is unable to hold himself back...and does what he had been guarding himself against...open up to her. It was just so beautiful. ❤️

Her fear of flying...interesting introduction...will she overcome it to be with him eventually? Or would he agree to settle back in the place that gave him bad memories, just for her? Whatever the case, I am sure their love will decide.😊

And the ending...☺️. Their relationship has changed officially. They can no longer pretend to be strangers anymore.

Edited by Afya - 12 years ago