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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow, that was a amazing and mind blowing update, written brilliantly.

Khushi listening to Arnav and her Garima's conversation was nice as she was mesmerised by hearing Arnav's laugh.

Awww love the fact Garima had adopted both Khushi and Payal, she had faced quite a few hardships in the process but had succeeded.

Wow loved the kitchen encounter, Arnav applying medicine and kissed her hand was a beautiful moment.

Khushi had realised that there was a soft pull between them and her moments together with Arnav always leave a smile on her face, so adorable.

Arnav helping Khushi with the contract clauses was nice and he was genuinely amazed how talented Khushi was.

Awww bless Khushi she is so cute, she had been waiting for Arnav in the kitchen for there alone time together and just to spend time with him she had been drinking the bitter coffee, so adorable.

You know what I love about the story, even though it is so amazing that it is mostly based only on Arshi.

Loved the update, eager to read more.

Please continue soon and thanks for the Email xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
😆What can i say? I have run out words to describe how perfect the update was! i don't think even a dictionary would help.

Arnav's change of behavior towards Garima was so cute!! The way you described him listening to Garima's animated narration was fantastic!"
Kushi was amazed and so was i? i mean watching a guy who secluded himself for days suddenly out of blue shakes with laugh (o handsome one of that) a girl is bound to get a heart attack!

Aww Kushi was a little hurt from Garima...She feels she has not been doing enough for her buaji... For the things Garima had done for her and her sister Kushi is bound to feel so!

Speaking of Garima... She is one hell of a strong Lady! Even though she is single, she fought for the girls. Her brother's daughters. If she went to such lengths then i imagine the strong bond between her and her brother! I love u Garimaji!

And suddenly Arnav's entry when Kushi was thinking of Buaji... i was like 'now from where did he pop up!

Arnav's concern for Kushi...Haaye... the way you have with words to describe their relationship between them is so beautiful

Err. Kushi you are not careless? whomare you kidding darling? if there is an award for the biggest klutz in the world, it would undoubtedly go for u! no competition!

Arnav's reaction to Kushi's burn and his concern for Kushi threw me off guard!!! Is this the same guy who locks himself up?
The way he felt when she called his name and the way he was mesmerized by her beauty... he felt as though someone close to him called he ? is that some indication?

Oh he talks to her only at nights? Must be he doesnt want anyone to know...

Before he could come into the Kitchen...Kushi knowing that it was him caught him by surprise...
Well wow!!! so nice!! He helped her with the contract issue and also was surprised that she was an artist...! and Aww !!! he knows thar she makes his coffee every morning!!! Isnt that sweet!!!

So Kushi finds herself everyday in the Kitchen after everyone retires...waiting for him to show up...!

All over i just loved it!! Arnav progression was so beautifully shown!!!! WOW!!! i dunno why but i feel soothing vibes from this story!!! and oh...its turning out to be a competition for finding love for my attention!
And the way you write makes me feel as though im watching it!!! Fantastic!!!!
This is for you...😆😆

Edited by mastermagician - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
so finally arnav and khushi getting to know each other...great update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow... Just awesome...
love it...
khushi likes his company...
amazing...
thanks dear...
u r superb...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Enjoyed the update !!!

Buaji is indeed a very good human being ..She not only adopted them but also made sure that they never miss being in a real family . Really remarkable :)
I'm glad that Arnav first came out of his territory and interacted with Buaji and ofcourse with Khushi ..
I loved their little meetings in the kitchen during night..He is slowly getting exposed to her inner and outer beauty as well..
Waiting to see their next interaction in the kitchen ...
Thanks for the notification :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love reading 'Finding Love' and have started reading 'The Healing Touch' as well. I must say you have an amazing talent. Thanks for sharing it with us. Both stories are beautiful.

Keep writing👏

SPG
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Posted: 12 years ago
this was awesome...beautiful interaction between arnav - khushi.

did he really kiss wound I can't believe it ...after all the hide and seek.

they belong to each other...a strong pull between them.

loved your writing.

sri.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i dnt have words fr describe this ff it was amzing so much good i loved every part of it just hope arnav ko ehssas ho khoushi kka hahah khoushi ji love love houvaa hhehe pllzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz UPDATE sonnn pllz cant wait to read more😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry Iam late to read and comment
Wonderful update - good to see this side of arnav
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Posted: 12 years ago
I can't believe I missed commenting on the latest chapter!! Sorry for the delay!

So Arnav is opening up to Khushi, well he's making baby steps into coming out of his shell...will see whether he joins her for another late night coffee session.

The way you described the scene in the kitchen when Khushi got burned was just fabulous. There was so much tension between the two...really loved your delivery.

Looking forward to reading about more of their encounters!!

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