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😳 Nidhi aab mai kya boloon my SLB...🤗
I consider myself fortunate for having gotten to know you so well.
I love you dammit...😃
Chalo now let me talk about mera update:
You slayed me right with the opening scene. I loved loved how khushi got into reminiscing over Arnav and the moments spent by them just seeing two strangers lost in their love for each other...Her longing to have such a strong and comforting relation with that special someone who she can always count as her own forever.
I loved the cosy scene that you painted of Arnav seating and working on the laptop and khushi painting her sketches so domesticated i tell you and i added a romantic music of my own at the background.
See that's why you are SLB not just because of your visual presentation, even your settings look and sound spectacular...
Arnav, khushi, a silent kitchen, both of them lost in work and the gentle ocean breeze. Could see all that in front of me nidhiji...Splendid i tell you.
And i loved the fact that this drawn introvert Arnav has become so free and comfortable with khushi that he actually asks her to show what she is doing? but still accepts her decision without getting overtly upset by her reaction and action. If i may think so.
Loved this confused lost khushi who looked for guidance from her friend in wanting some insight into the working of the heart...
And i liked jenny for being the patient friend that she is in guiding her friend and giving her an ear to understand the complicated working of the heart which sometimes makes you long for something which you feel is not for you but you still feel a strong connection with that person.
Oh so khushi and me share another thing in common i have a weird almost psychotic fear of flying but i still manage to catch up on all Air Crash Investigation episode...😆
Kya karoo i think i am also pagal like khushi...😆
You nailed it nidhi...its so true the minute you let anyone on your secret about your feelings for somebody, you end up feeling transparent as if all your thoughts are on your face for display...
Hence could totally understand khushi's position of helplessness seeing Arnav for the 1st time after admitting to her friend that maybe arnav might be her 'someone special'
The Khushi 'Tum theek ho' spread a huge grin on my face...Looks like that will never go out of fashion.
Ohhh what is this, yeh kya i wonder why Arnav is stopping himself and what is anguishing his heart so much...Do we have a history there some heartbreak with La aur maybe inablity to protect someone special in his life like Di...
Want to tell Arnav that he is in the right place and khushi would take care of him...
But it would be fun to read the whole process of how Arnav will finally realise that for himself.
But what i loved the most was that inspite of that long lecture that Arnav gave himself he was not able to stay away from khushi, the emotional connection & longing my friend brilliantly told. 👏
I could almost hear the ocean waves and feel the ocean breeze as Arnav and Khushi walked on that beach..
Sad for Arnav his mother's death must have taken a toll on his young mind though i am sure that its something else that has got Arnav so tied up and withdrawn...Dying to find out that mystery Nidhi.
And the kiss at the end...PERFECT.
Just what it should be...and since i got a visual presentation of it...you know how blissfully happy i am..😉
I couldn't have asked for a better chapter to call mera chapter Nidhi...
Thank you once again...🤗
Phew thats it next raamkahani for the next update...
Edited by kondhili - 12 years ago
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