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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#521

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I'm really sorry for commenting late. I know it is unforgivable, but please try🤗

Coming to the update, it was a superb update👏 I loved it to the core❤️

At the beginning, the way Khushi got emotional seeing a much in love couple was really nice. It made her wonder how she would feel if she were to share a similar relationship with a man. That part was really nice. And the way her mind drifted off to the previous nights where she spent with Arnav, while her talking to him and him patiently listening was really sweet of her. It shows the depth of her feelings towards Arnav.

The conversation with Jenny was really unexpected. I never thought that Khushi would open up about her feelings towards Arnav. But she did. And the way Jenny handled the situation was too good. She really is a clever person. The way she made Khushi realize that she was attracted to Arnav was smooth, but fruitful. I loved that bit.

Next bit where you explained Khushi's turmoil to figure out what she felt for Arnav, whether it was just attraction or not was well penned down. And the way she thought that Arnav was actually gong to ask her out for a date was really cute. Although I knew Arnav would not do such a thing, for a minute I wondered whether it would actually happen. But alas, it did not happen.

For once I felt sorry for Arnav. He really thinks about Khushi. He is trying to stay away from her, because he doesn't want to taint her life in darkness. But I really want him to realize that Khushi's life could be made colourful only by him. Wonder when that will happen.

And then came the biggest surprise of the whole chapter. The most awaited first kiss☺️ I'm so glad that he finally opened up to Khushi about his past. And Khushi as usual being the most adorable girl made him want to open up to her. She really is a wonderful and patient girl. Aww... I loved the first kiss Nidhi, now you have started to make me blush while reading this story as well. How am I going to survive😲

Loved the entire chapter❤️ Thanks for giving us another wonderful story. Love you girl🤗

Eagerly waiting for the next update to know about the after effects of the first kiss😉

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#522

Nidhi, I am speechless. I really don't know what to say.

This story really effects me . Since the time I read the first chapter I have fallen in love ith it.

This happens rarely with me. I take time to warm up.

I have said it before and I will say it again. I am in love with this brooding Arnav.

I can imagine him in that beautiful beach house.

The description is so vivid and beautiful, I imagine Arnav and Khushi in that house having coffee and worlking.

And that walk on the beavh. I could feel the tension in the air.

One can like a story but it is rare to feel part of it.

You have managed to do that with this story. BRAVO!

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IPK007

@IPK007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#523

Awesome update once again..loved reading it so much...! This is fast becoming one of fav FF ever. With every update, I can literally hear the gentle sound of waves crashing on the beach and the cry of the sea gulls too. I like Khushi's friend..seems like a really nice girl😆 And who is this Raj?! 😆 As it is my hubby is getting a wee bit troubled by my fondness for Mr. Sobti and now Raj😆..

Coming to the update..I love how Khushi opened up to her friend...and her innocent questions to better understand the slow unfurling of a new emotion in her heart...was really poignant.

Arnav seems to be affected by her too and I loved his resolve to not mess with her...as she was too special to deserve anything less than somebody's whole heart. I am getting more and more curious about his past relationship...and the inner workings of his mind. But I guess, we'll know soon.

The invisble pull they both feel towards each other is becoming harder to ignore with every passing moment...and khushi seems ready to acknowledge it. Loved how Arnav found it so easy to share his painful past with her.

And the last scene at the beach was so romantic...loved how things progressed so naturally to the kiss...

Can't wait for the next update...

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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#524

Res

Edit!!

So we finally see Arnav opening up to Khushi a little and sharing his past about his mom. That must have been painful indeed and I loved how it was so easy for him to share something so painful with her.

Loved how they worked side by side, and their meetings in the kitchen. Seems like the kitchen is going to multi purpose place for them eh 😉

I was pleasantly surprised at a kiss so early and I'm guessing Arnav is now going to ignore her for the next few days, especially curious to see who is this person who he needed a room for.

This was a visual chapter so kudos to you for making it so real for us!!

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@SuperstarSanaya

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#525

Res 😃

Another very good morning with THT update.. 😃 -----------

Edited:

I had to read 5 times before I can edit my comment.

and, I still feeling like I need to read it again n again to put thru my feeling that this chapter evoked!

Nidhi Darling, I love FL trust me but I am sorry to say, What I feel for THT is something beyond this story loving feeling.

Like Charu said, It rare when you feel part of the story.. and that is what I am experiencing now!

what a fantabolously amazing chap.👏👏

Their holding up.. and both of them couldn't avoid the sparkling connection.

Loved how Khushi worded her heart out to Jenny.

This story is first of a kind where they aren't fighting with each other n coming to Love..

but they are Fighting to stay away.. and slowly coming to Love.👏

like Moth to flame.. iron to magnet!

This brooding Arnav is giving such a tough competition to Foster I am telling you.

I just m falling for him pretty bad.

I have read this part for like more than 10 times. n still n just going on n on about it.

He knew she was still waiting for his answer, he knew she wanted him to open up to her and was trying to understand why it was so difficult for him.

"Because of this Khushi" he whispered against her lips as his softly settled over hers.

👏

Its the most beautiful Kiss ever that I have read! bas!

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Hawa1997

@Hawa1997

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#526

Res😉

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Nihdi, what a dhaamakidaar update!!!!

Khushi finally was able to voice out what her heart is feeling toward Arnav!! Glad she had a friend like Jenny that she can get advice from for what she is feeling...

Arnav knows that there is something more than just a mere friendship between the two,and he is really scared to what it can lead to, seems like that his past relationship really scarred him and he is trying avoid getting hurt again..

But he couldn't stop himself as he is attracted to her like a magnetic force, as he joined her on the beach.. It's like they find solace in each others company.. He is slowly letting his guard down towards Khushi and told her about his past..really felt bad about his mom dying and he having to leave Charlotte on a bad circumstance..

He kissed her!!! Oh why leave it there,such a cliffhanger, Nihdi!!!

I hope he doesn't regret it and do something bad in the end...

Brilliantly written and well expressed👏

Eagerly waiting for the update,unpatiently😕

Thanks again for the email and the pm...

Please update soon,

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#527

Coffee time ! 😳

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I am so glad Khushi opened her heart to her friend "Jenny" ...the way she was so muddled up with all her pent up feelings she needed to open up ...it definitely lead to some realizations and acceptance of her feelings !

I loved the way she described Arnav's characteristics to Jenny !

And Arnav on the other hand is also not ignorant of the pull towards Khushi ... it is a lost cause to even try and stay away from her after all they are Arnav and Khushi !😳

When he came up to her and said "I was wondering if..." and then trailed off hanging that sentence it almost felt like he was testing the waters and wanted to know how she would react and immediately realised what that did to her and tried his approach in a neutral way thereafter!

Loved the whole beach sequence ... the way they give company to each other even in their silence is something i have seen only between couples who have been together for a while and to see them so at ease together is so overwhelming.

His answer to her question of "why" was absolutely befitting and held a lot of promise !

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#528

Pasting my comments from the post I made by mistake later...

Amazing Nidhi, loved this chapter to the core... There were so many beautiful yet painful moments it is hard to describe...

From what I can gather, Arnav has been badly burnt in a relationship before, someone he loved dearly had hurt him terribly... That is why he is hesitating to get close to Khushi... But the pull between them is so strong, he cannot resist the attraction between them...

So what is Arnav's back story, no not about his parents, which incidentally was very sad to read... But about his previous love life...

I loved the easy companionship these two feel with each other... Although, poles apart they are so strongly tuned to each other...

Loved the way are writing the story it makes a beautiful read all the way through...

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#529

Unresd finally on page 67!

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#530

R.
This story is always alive in my head and I cant stop thinking about it. I feel so good when I read its updates. And fab narration with another beautiful chapter, Nidhi.
Firstly, dont we all want a friend like Jenny in our lives. Who dont judge or preach or tell what to do but still their words just clears up the haze. I loved to read the two friends just sharing their thoughts with each other.

Secondly, we see couples in love. Then either gush or just let it pass. But when in a place like what Khushi is now, Arnav has evoked the longing to love and be loved. It has been potrayed just so naturally with their encounters in the kitchen. As much as communicating is important, silence- companionable, has its own charm.

I wouldnt say that Khushi is a fool,wearing her heart on her sleeves, or her emotions which are very easy to be deciphered not only by Jenny whom she had told but also by Arnav. Coz the thing is Arnav may seem like a mystery who hasnt said anything, but still, he made it felt, what he feels for Khushi is there for her to draw herself towards him. It isnt as if he is indifferent. So Khushi,dear, you arnt the only one who is attracted to him.
Thats another thing that Arnav is trying hard to stop himself. Now the man,it seems, has been really really badly cheated or left by someone. And thats where Khushi comes in. I hope, she resurrects his trust coz she until now has been sensible and strong to accept her feelings. So she may go and get her chance at this happines for them. But ofcourse, there have to be hiccups. And I am not having a good feeling about the latest one. The new guest.

It was so heartening to hear out Arnav open a bit. There is some insight. His mother s death is saddening. Maybe his present state of heart too has to do with his family..may be not..before I could think of it, I melted. THE KISS. ON THE BEACH. ❤️ But ofcourse, he says he cant speak to her these things because of it. The attraction. I hope it doesnt hurt Khushi to know he is trying to get away from her. Although thats not possible- to stay from her.

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