[OS] Afterglow - Page 8

Wow!! That was a beautifully written OS!!! Loved the suspense, the heartbreak... And some romance!!!

Loved it!!

This was beautiful...
You know i realised you didnt mention khushi even once...
I loved it a lot...
So many questions though...

you have an eye for detail and the power of your words brought to life quite vividly the places, the decor, the sunset and the atmosphere... loved the way the fascinating dancing girl drew arnav to her... the haunting supernatural element running through the story was beautifully done! nowhere does khushi's name appear but that is the image that is engraved in our minds!

OMG...!!!! That was an Amazing OS...Really lovd it...

That was beautiful OS..

this was really a master piece
Awsome

Thank you so much Zehra ... Thanks once again for links its wonderful os.
I can see each and every small small things . Firstly I thought it like fashion show Lucknow recreation. Awesome . Started from his thoughts his dress then nature... I can see all. I can see Khushi and Arnav in that dress . I think no one need that picture of visualizing things .
His friend surprised when he told him that dancer run away. Its confirmed my doubt. But I was wrong. Glad you proved me wrong.

am really thankful to lazyleaves for sharing this story's link with us...otherwise i would have really really missed something this dazzling...something this pure and beautiful...LOVED IT...amazing...

Loved this story. Read this story as this was the story that was featured in the story of the week in IPK forum. The way you write it is absolute treat to read, it is like I am reading a poetry in motion. Loved the whole story. Good job. Your writing is awesome and the way you are able to write humor in IC as well as this piece, I really am admiring your penmanship. Do continue to write as you really have good talent. All the best.

I have no words to describe it.. It's just Wow!!
So beautifully written!!!