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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

That was beautiful..

One of your best pieces, yet..

The description was so vivid and everything was recounted in this dreamy way, it was like I was watching them interact.

Their emotions, longing. Unspoken, but out there for everybody to feel.

The emotions just jump off the screen..

I loved it.

Gonna go back and read it again :))

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

OMG!!! How on earth did I miss this one!! I was totally transported to the Ancient raja rani times.. it was like me traveling in fantasy world...This seems such a desi Cinderella piece!! i was in a trance for a while nd took my sweet time reading the shot slowly , basking with the words..

U rock \m/

edit add : Arnie boy in kurta

Edited by munam_13 - 12 years ago

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Hawa1997

@Hawa1997

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Simply mindblowing!!

You transported me to another time zone while I read this.. This is so beautiful!!!

⭐️👏

Love it😊

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PixieFairy

@PixieFairy

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

This was Simply Awsome .. Loved it 😃😃

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

nice os -

thx to zehra for suggesting this OS as story of the week

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Sidda

@Sidda8

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Beautiful OS. It was enchanting and mesmerizing. Arnav had fallen in love with the ghostly Khushi, whom he can never be with in reality and yet I kind of hoped he'd go to the after-world so that he can always be with her.