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tashi26

@tashi26

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

She seemed like arnav's imagination...it was a beautiful piece of writing...😊

Edited by tashi26 - 12 years ago

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PANCHI__pOOJa

@Panchi__Doll

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Beautifully written...felt lyk I was reading sum poem wen u described her!!

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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Ana, this is so beautiful. I cant even put it in words. Gorgeous piece of writing :)

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

What an amazing and intriguing story!!! sheer brillance...left me mulling over it...and, special thanks to Zehra, for making a mention about this unconventional OS..

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Jennifer

@Jennymyola

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

holy crow! Was this a poem or a 4D movie, where u can feel it too?! I got goosebumps reading this delectable piece of writing! Ana-'really rock'-sick

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Snowy_Arshi

@Snowy_Arshi

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Amazing os something entirely different from what I have read till now and for the first time I have loved something with a sad ending great work :)

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Sorry for the delay commenting.
But this os was something different I have read.
The identity of the girl wasn't revealed. But let me just keep khushi in mind.
And Of course, the ending was brilliant.
Great job and do continue writing such pieces. It blows my mind. 😃

Edited by SilentShadow - 12 years ago

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anannya

@aneelovesarshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Was she even for real?

loved the os but curious to know who she was?

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Anna, just re read it and found it just so beautiful, it was something above and beyond anything I have ever read, the expressions un parallel ! The feeling were emoted so perfectly...seriously magical ! Take a bow! Now!